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#wattpad #random A never ending train of thoughts and words which are very dear to me. My work contains some poems and extracts based on my life. Life often gets lonely, the fire, the desire with which we fight ends at a certain time. It's then that we see through our life. Our messy, tamable and reckless soul tha...

Out of blush, the sail is lifted by the sunset On an icy fjord one winter day Hope for a bright lantern that lets you safely through The coast is full of islets, rocks and dangerous waters What happens in between - it happens Self examination, changes and choices Standing in front of a challenge, a crossroads A misty landscape - how important can that be? Blacklacquered nails navigate the situation Frustration destroys calm - becomes restless and irritated Grasp unanswered questions through generations, lives and experiences There was no planned process A giant step in the right direction in rugged and unclear terrain 17/09/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Crossroads Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 2nd place in the contest

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Constance La France

Date: 9/24/2019 1:08:00 PM

Sun congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write, love the image too!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2019 1:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/23/2019 10:14:00 AM

My friend, Congratulations on your placement in SilentOne's Crossroads contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2019 11:44:00 AM

- Many thanks for congratulations, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/23/2019 8:20:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2019 8:21:00 AM

- Joseph, thanks so much for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/23/2019 6:12:00 AM

Nice introspection at the crossroads ... Congratulations, Sunshine on your nice placement ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2019 6:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/22/2019 5:31:00 PM

Congratulations my friend on your win in the contest....:) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2019 3:21:00 AM

- Sandra, thanks so much for your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/22/2019 4:28:00 PM

Congrats Anne-Lise, for TOP honors you received.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2019 3:20:00 AM

- Thanks so much for your congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2019 4:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2019 3:19:00 AM

- Many thanks for a great 2st place in your contest, S.O. :) - A pleasure to participate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2019 5:28:00 AM

Well done Anne-Lise ! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2019 3:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 9/18/2019 10:27:00 PM

Love this. Great imagery and expression. Excellent. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2019 3:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/17/2019 9:27:00 PM

this is beautiful my friend...great penning! :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2019 3:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2019 7:52:00 PM

Anne-Lise, oh your poem is so beautifully written, a winner!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2019 3:02:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2019 3:06:00 PM

So deep and meaningful..I really liked your metaphors..excellent poem, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/20/2019 3:02:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 9/17/2019 2:30:00 PM

If you do not win first place I will have a talk with the Silent One, so beautiful and so well written my friend!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2019 3:53:00 AM

- Your comment made me smile Bobby, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/17/2019 2:07:00 PM

Wow, that was really good my friend. What a creative piece of poetry that should land squarely at the top of the winners list. Beautifully done Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2019 3:52:00 AM

- Wow ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)