-------------------------The Soul I Sold------------

If I seem down forgive me Frowns I carry around live in me When I break you see right through me GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD... The hurt I’ve learned brews in me GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD... Your words so true renew me If only you'd re-design me Take time rewind refine me Recreate the mold without lies I’ve told... GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD... The hurt I’ve learned brews in me GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD....

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Shaz Cheesman

Date: 5/25/2012 5:15:00 AM

wow.....really like this poem JS, i feel the vulnerability and the loss. Thank you for sharing - Shaz

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/3/2012 6:25:00 AM

Ooo awesome me likey...this is going in my favs xx Hugs

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/19/2012 7:06:00 AM

whooosh! I understand! well written again! JSL! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 10:30:00 PM

a sad lament JS but a deep emotional cry for help with a determined spirit.. your soul is your mind and u wouild not want to be void of that luv..the spirit man crying out .. touching words luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/15/2012 5:32:00 AM

Wow like this one, well done a lot of thought in here xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2012 5:05:00 PM

Wow Joey, this is truly a fabulous write! The line, "GIVE BACK THE SOUL I SOLD" is an incredible statement in your poem...it makes your poem so powerful! I really enjoyed this poem of yours, it's a cut above your usual excellent write! Great Work!!