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When you say "I love you"..... All the butterflies move.... When you say bye... Tears almost come to my eyes.... But I tell myself you'll always be there tomorrow... To refill the sorrow... The sorrow that you caused... Because you just wont let the other one go.... So I can give you all the love I want to show.... Without the feeling that maybe im the only one that feels this way... Thinking that every day... You might just leave... And take away the key... the key to my heart.... Leaving it open for it just to fall apart.... No bandages... No medicine..... Can fix this pain... Only you can help me feel sane.... Its funny cause at the same time your the one making me insane.... More at Eleanor Sweet

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Date: 6/15/2010 2:15:00 PM
Dear Eleanor: Great poem on the mixed emotions that a relationship can bring. I look forward to future poems. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Eleanor. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:51:00 PM
Written with feeling, Love Roger
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:11:00 AM
Emotions well captured here, well done. Regards, Gavin.
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Date: 6/14/2010 3:13:00 AM
Love poems abound on every website I have frequented. probably because the emotions are easily grasped and described with pen and paper. It amazes me how many different way the feelings can be described, you did an excellent job with this enjoyable read.
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