You

"you" with light from sun and moon I see you between angelic melodies I hear you with a summer breeze I feel you between air fresh and new I need you with a light feather you touch me in sync we dace and fly the sky never looking back never asking why always each morning I love you SkyWatcher 08-16-22

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2022 8:01:00 PM

Have you been at Soup very long, Lisa. If I have not added you to my followed list, now is the time. You write beautifully

Lisa Ricci
Date: 9/10/2022 4:01:00 AM

Good Morning Andrea. Hi. Thank you so very much for such a generous and gracious review and commentary. Truly. I do not take visits or commentary for granted. I have been a member since February of 2017. However, since I began here, I have had numerous issues to contend with. My own health, the care of two elderly parents and more. Thus with life circumstances I seem to come and go and I am not consistently active sad to say. I do however enjoy being a member here. It is a pleasure to read the wonderful works of others and everyone is respectful of one another. Thank you again Andrea. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup and I look forward to returning to your page and work. (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 8:06:00 AM

You have a special touch, like Midas. When you write poems of love, everything seems to turn to gold, Lisa. The flow of the poem was excellent. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/23/2022 11:18:00 AM

Hello again Bill. Words do not express my appreciation. Never do I take reviews or comments for granted. Good Bad or Indifferent. I respect all opinions and intakes. Thank you again for such generosity. It is my hope that my work is deserving of it. Have a great afternoon and night. I will see you on your page very soon. Blessings always. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/18/2022 8:55:00 AM

Very romantic. Wish you'd write more.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/19/2022 2:47:00 AM

Hello Victor - Thank you Thank you. Truly. Have a great afternoon and night now and always. Love and Blessings now and always also...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2022 7:38:00 AM

I love your lines “with a light feather you touch me”. “between angelic melodies I hear you” Two spirits may fly together in perfect harmony. This is a Fave for me Lisa. Have a wonderful day my friend. Blessings xxoo

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/19/2022 2:49:00 AM

Hello Connie. Words do not express my appreciation for your visit and wonderful review telling me what you thought. Truly. Have a wonderful day and night. Love Peace and Blessings always Connie. I will see you soon on your page.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/17/2022 9:10:00 PM

Lovely poem Lisa full of romance. Enjoyed reading...

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/18/2022 3:35:00 AM

Good Morning Michael. Thank you very much. I very much appreciate your comment. May all know of love. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. I hope to return to your page very soon.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/17/2022 6:19:00 PM

Dear Lisa, the beautiful romance of your poem is so tenderly expressed. Dreamy imagery! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/18/2022 3:32:00 AM

Thank you very much Susan. Hi. I very much appreciate your generous comment. Have a wonderful day.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/17/2022 12:30:00 PM

Very romantic tribute Lisa. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/18/2022 3:33:00 AM

Good Morning Tom. Thank you as always. I'm glad you liked this small entry. May you be keeping well also. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always.