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Wisteria

Oh how this bodice is dressed in taffeta, Lined with hundreds of lavender pleats Spiraling, drooping, whirling All over my voluptuous contour … Bare these limbs grinding on soft moss To tap among rustled displays From many a lovers’ heat to children’s romp. I gaze at my long tresses hung by threads Of July frills, combing the strands Delicate as clusters in a spin that ignites The evening air, the lush of daylight’s vine… And like Kojin in a free-fall prance, I cascade Through a mantle of grass, my arms floating Over wisps of mildest pink, of boldest lavender; Then to curtsy in a prayerful Shinto bow Under heaven's marquee where my chants about lonesome tales are hushed in secrecy. At nightfall, stars circle my lit frame, The aroma of wisteria's mint huffs outside my pores and unto an earthy glow; Young the nippled buds swelling in lusty dusk Till I gently writhe as a mystical shadow of the woods. ...................... SPRINGTIME STANDARD CONTEST ~ The wisteria tree is packed with an assemblage of purple blossoms, falling in tapered clusters to symbolize a kneeling pose of honor and devotion based on Asian folklore. ~ Kojin: Japanese Tree Goddess
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Carber Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Congrats Nette on your 1st-- quite lovely & lyrical!
Ashley Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 10:11 PM
I was entranced by the bewitching beauty and sensuous artistry of your poem, Nette. Exquisite, delicate and fantastically feminine personification. A fav! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Beautiful, sensual personification and breathtaking imagery in this lovely poem, Nette. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Kroll Avatar
May 18, 2017 at 8:37 PM
Congrats on your win and a beautifful poem. You paint such a beautiful image of springtime. It's almost as if your body metamorphoses and becomes a part of the spring time scene, floating through it. Lovely! Kathy
Onclaud Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 12:42 PM
Duet Avatar
May 18, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Just wonderful, Nette! What a beautiful tribute to a beautiful tree. I've always loved wisteria. And, congratulations on your deserved win. I really enjoyed reading this one.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 10:29 PM
This is outstnding Nette! If anyone has never seen the lush beauty of this draping flower vine they don't have a clue how divine it is. Your wonderful imagery does this loveliest of flowers justice! 7Congratulations on your placement which I am surprized wasn't higher. Blessings, Connie
Scars Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Nette, such beautiful imagery lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Ober Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! This poem is full of amazing imagery. I really loved your reference to Kojin.
A  Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations, Nette " Trees Personified " ~SKAT~
Konos Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 7:05 AM
Reminds me of grandmother's beautiful 13 acres with all fencing covered in Wisteria and my riding my palomino near the fencing inhaling the scent of Wisteria...forever embedded in my heart...Lovely...but then you wrote it....thanks for the memories
Ebbs Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Congrats on your win:)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:30 PM
Eloquent write nette! Congrats on first place win!
Haight Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Very exquisitely beautiful, Nette! A big congratulations for your well-deserved 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 8:18 PM
Wonderful description and flowing poem. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Richards Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 7:35 PM
This is bliss !! No wonder it found its way to the top !!! Well deserved, for sure !!! Congratulations dear Nette!
Grahamburglar Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Wow, this is beautiful and congrats on a very well deserved win.
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 4:44 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Puddifoot Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 4:32 PM
a stunning poem, nette, so much beautiful imagery packed into it - that last stanza is perfection! congrats on your first place win in my contest :)
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 7:49 PM
so gorgeous Nette your words flow with eloquence hugs 7
Manassian Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Oh Nette....You blew me away with this. I was truly mesmerized by every line...This certain will do well with Charlotte. :) Oh dear...so many lines are beautiful, but honestly....that last stanza is just heavenly. Hugs, dear...hugs.
Nunez Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 7:18 AM
You never disappoint, Nette. Consistently coming up with gems. Would be surprised if this doesn't get a podium finish. hugs!
Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 4:03 PM
So beautiful this is Nette..So so beautiful.
Arana Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 1:29 PM
Goodness, gracious. I am in total awe---speechless!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:54 PM
- Beautiful and impressive, dear Nette - I wish you good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:11 PM
beautiful beautiful beautiful Nette! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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