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Oh how this bodice is dressed in taffeta, Lined with hundreds of lavender pleats Spiraling, drooping, whirling All over my voluptuous contour … Bare these limbs grinding on soft moss To tap among rustled displays From many a lovers’ heat to children’s romp. I gaze at my long tresses hung by threads Of July frills, combing the strands Delicate as clusters in a spin that ignites The evening air, the lush of daylight’s vine… And like Kojin in a free-fall prance, I cascade Through a mantle of grass, my arms floating Over wisps of mildest pink, of boldest lavender; Then to curtsy in a prayerful Shinto bow Under heaven's marquee where my chants about lonesome tales are hushed in secrecy. At nightfall, stars circle my lit frame, The aroma of wisteria's mint huffs outside my pores and unto an earthy glow; Young the nippled buds swelling in lusty dusk Till I gently writhe as a mystical shadow of the woods. ...................... SPRINGTIME STANDARD CONTEST ~ The wisteria tree is packed with an assemblage of purple blossoms, falling in tapered clusters to symbolize a kneeling pose of honor and devotion based on Asian folklore. ~ Kojin: Japanese Tree Goddess

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Date: 6/21/2019 9:10:00 AM
Congrats Nette on your 1st-- quite lovely & lyrical!
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Date: 6/20/2019 10:11:00 PM
I was entranced by the bewitching beauty and sensuous artistry of your poem, Nette. Exquisite, delicate and fantastically feminine personification. A fav! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/19/2017 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful, sensual personification and breathtaking imagery in this lovely poem, Nette. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/18/2017 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win and a beautifful poem. You paint such a beautiful image of springtime. It's almost as if your body metamorphoses and becomes a part of the spring time scene, floating through it. Lovely! Kathy
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Date: 5/18/2017 6:28:00 PM
Just wonderful, Nette! What a beautiful tribute to a beautiful tree. I've always loved wisteria. And, congratulations on your deserved win. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 6/19/2016 10:29:00 PM
This is outstnding Nette! If anyone has never seen the lush beauty of this draping flower vine they don't have a clue how divine it is. Your wonderful imagery does this loveliest of flowers justice! 7Congratulations on your placement which I am surprized wasn't higher. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:57:00 PM
Nette, such beautiful imagery lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! This poem is full of amazing imagery. I really loved your reference to Kojin.
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Date: 9/4/2015 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette " Trees Personified " ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/2/2015 7:05:00 AM
Reminds me of grandmother's beautiful 13 acres with all fencing covered in Wisteria and my riding my palomino near the fencing inhaling the scent of Wisteria...forever embedded in my heart...Lovely...but then you wrote it....thanks for the memories
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Date: 8/31/2015 2:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 8/30/2015 11:30:00 PM
Eloquent write nette! Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 8/30/2015 9:12:00 PM
Very exquisitely beautiful, Nette! A big congratulations for your well-deserved 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/30/2015 8:18:00 PM
Wonderful description and flowing poem. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/30/2015 7:35:00 PM
This is bliss !! No wonder it found its way to the top !!! Well deserved, for sure !!! Congratulations dear Nette!
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Date: 8/30/2015 5:16:00 PM
Wow, this is beautiful and congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 8/30/2015 4:44:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2015 4:32:00 PM
a stunning poem, nette, so much beautiful imagery packed into it - that last stanza is perfection! congrats on your first place win in my contest :)
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Date: 8/27/2015 7:49:00 PM
so gorgeous Nette your words flow with eloquence hugs 7
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Date: 8/27/2015 1:55:00 PM
Oh Nette....You blew me away with this. I was truly mesmerized by every line...This certain will do well with Charlotte. :) Oh dear...so many lines are beautiful, but honestly....that last stanza is just heavenly. Hugs, dear...hugs.
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Date: 8/27/2015 7:18:00 AM
You never disappoint, Nette. Consistently coming up with gems. Would be surprised if this doesn't get a podium finish. hugs!
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Date: 8/26/2015 4:03:00 PM
So beautiful this is Nette..So so beautiful.
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Date: 8/26/2015 1:29:00 PM
Goodness, gracious. I am in total awe---speechless!
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:54:00 PM
- Beautiful and impressive, dear Nette - I wish you good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:11:00 PM
beautiful beautiful beautiful Nette! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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