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Why Raindrops Drip and Drop in Time

Why raindrops drip and drop in time, not timorous; divine. A splash, playful in a pond of koi brass. Tines of Sankyo, priceless precipitation; A plink and plunk, Chopin; “Till the End of Time,” that is why raindrops hold their gravity, until the fruit of their musicality must be mined, be longed by great golden fish with open lips excited by the weather without human palms to catch, a catch that croaks and grunts, that fills the pond.

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Date: 7/16/2024 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. I enjoyed reading this one... Have a wonderful day with your win...........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2024 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 7/14/2024 10:44:00 PM
"to catch, a catch that croaks and grunts" - A grand writing. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2024 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! Hugs
Date: 7/14/2024 9:44:00 PM
'to catch a catch that croaks and grunts, that fills the pond' beautiful write. happy writing dear poet. congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thank you,Thriveni! Glad you liked that part.
Date: 7/14/2024 9:47:00 AM
Wonderful descriptions and ideas in this short but sweet poem... congrats!! Xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2024 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Crystol!
Date: 7/5/2024 11:10:00 AM
Once again, your interesting slant on things- beautiful work, Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2024 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 7/2/2024 8:54:00 PM
Rain is indeed priceless precipitation. Can anyone fix the price of water or rain....? When we get it free, we never think of its value. A beautiful poem on raindrops, dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2024 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/1/2024 10:21:00 PM
It is refreshing to read your poem dear poet. Happy writing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2024 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Thriveni!

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