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WHILE MEDITATING--20 TITLES

Unrestrained, my essence glows between worlds, in the deep tenderness of twilight across a bridge, along a nebula gliding-- this ride held by the spirit of the wilderness, a silence immense… where light’s universe becomes music to my soul -union as the cradle of wellness... a trance almost, expands in some universe not cornered By winds drifting unto a meditative realm with ease unmapped by this earthly compass: I am at the risk of a heavenly touch... this wisdom leading nothingness through a beautiful mystery-- There's no finality in this haloed splendor only a discernment meeting the god within-- that from the bliss of solitude, noises hide me in an inner sanctuary which honors peace , that finding my way, I am nothing but whole. ------- 7/27/2019 20 Titles from 20 Friends Contest of Richard Lamoureux ------------------------- Between Worlds—Pixie Dust Tenderness of Twilight—Silent One With Ease—Lou Loo Beautiful Mystery—Frederic Parker Finding my way--Richard Lamoureux Nebula—Sunshine Smile Touch—Rob Carmack Splendor--Carrie Richards Wisdom—Eve Roper Universe—Gregory R Barden Bridge—Victor Buhagiar Hide Me—Kelly Deschler The cradle—John Lawless Cornered—Charlotte Puddiffot A Trance Almost—Lawrence Sharp Unrestrained—Paul Callus Spirit of the Wilderness—Agnes Krampe Music to My Soul-- Rhonda Johnson-Saunders In the Deep--David Mohn The Bliss of Solitude--Dear Heart

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Date: 8/15/2019 4:09:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win with this amazing write and thanks so much for using my title, The Bliss of Solitude, I am honored !
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Date: 8/9/2019 2:41:00 PM
Wow, amazing poem and thank you for using one of my titles! I am honored :) -luloo
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Date: 8/2/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your second place win. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/2/2019 5:51:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Nette..
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Date: 8/1/2019 6:47:00 PM
Very nice Nette. Congrats on your 2nd place win. Huggs // Charlie :)
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Date: 8/1/2019 5:16:00 PM
Love the ethereal feel of this poem, nette. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 8/1/2019 4:07:00 PM
Oh gorgeous Nette! WOW! It’s like a beautiful sculpture created from “pre-loved” bits and pieces and glued together with love :-)
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Date: 8/1/2019 3:43:00 PM
Ditto to the other commenters, congrats Nette on another fine win!
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Date: 8/1/2019 1:53:00 PM
This is so flawless, nette, that it's hard to believe that you were using actual titles!! Congrats on your richly deserved win. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/1/2019 1:25:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place on the winner list, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/30/2019 8:06:00 PM
you joined these titles with such finesse it's hard to believe it was created with titles...awesome poem Nette :) hugs
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Date: 7/30/2019 7:52:00 PM
You did a superb job with the titles Nette...
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Date: 7/29/2019 6:33:00 PM
Hello Nette Onclaud, mediating is very relaxing for the whole body. I do it often. It is peaceful for the mind. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 7/28/2019 1:29:00 PM
- Excellent, Nette ... impressive in its entirety - an honor that you chose my title ... in this top winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2019 10:26:00 AM
A great poem dear friend, all the best for the contest with this stunning write. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/28/2019 8:45:00 AM
You wrote this well with the 20 titles you used...describing an outer body experience...
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Date: 7/28/2019 7:40:00 AM
I was in the middle of reading this when I realized it was 20 titles from 20 friends. I would have NEVER suspected it though. You have done these titles more than justice; you have honored them Nette. Well done! My muse Trixie and I are both blowing you kisses.
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Date: 7/28/2019 6:55:00 AM
Great flow to your poem..cohesive, despite the varied titles ..well written, as always, nette.
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Date: 7/28/2019 4:32:00 AM
you wove these titles in so brilliant Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2019 3:20:00 AM
Divine work; I'm contemplating on the deep solace of your imagery!
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Date: 7/28/2019 12:11:00 AM
Great selection! Good luck! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/27/2019 11:50:00 PM
Looks like a winner to me' Panagiota
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