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Utterly UniqueUtterly Unique Oregon landscape

Quote: “It is utterly false and cruelly arbitrary to put all the play and learning into childhood, all the work into middle age, and all the regrets into old age”. -- Margaret Mead On a spring morn bathed in golden light, I'm enchanted by the mist, a breathtaking sight, Like stairways to heaven, from the lake they rise, Utterly spellbound, I wander beneath azure skies. Yet wars rage on in lands afar, Where freedom falters 'neath a tyrant's star, Innocents fall, hostages to greed's cruel deal, Utterly disheartened by the leaders' heart of steel. But amidst the chaos, wildflowers bloom, On the ridge they dance, dispelling gloom, Sparrows and swallows in a joyous spree, Utterly beautiful, a sight so lovely, it sets the spirit free. On a warm afternoon, thoughts drift anew, Watch deer and chase turkeys, in sun's warm hue, And in quiet repose, my aging frame does rest, Utterly, I must write a poem, before I forget.

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:14:00 PM
Jay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jay - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2024 10:46:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful "Utterly" write again. Enjoy your day/win..............
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Date: 3/26/2024 7:22:00 AM
Hello Jay. This poem is so nicely written and has such imagination - it's lovely. I love the quote from Margaret, as well. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/20/2024 11:51:00 AM
I loved reading your wonderful "Utterly" write.  What a pretty picture. Love the true quote... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 3/19/2024 12:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem. You have done full justice to the topic. I like the stanza on war. We are all "Utterly disheartened by the leader' s heart of steel". This is the disappointment of all peace loving men.
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Date: 3/18/2024 4:17:00 PM
I can relate to the quote you placed before your poem...all those regrets in old age is just mind boggling at times. :-) I loved your repetitive use of 'utterly,' for it gave me pause for introspection. I'm utterly appalled with the chaos, wars, etc., of today's world. Somedays I, too, must utterly write! Well done, Jay. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 3/18/2024 2:12:00 PM
Jay….your poem is wonderful in its beautiful imagery and message! “Wildflowers bloom amidst the chaos” just lovely my friend! Debx
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