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Utterly

Quote: “It is utterly false and cruelly arbitrary to put all the play and learning into childhood, all the work into middle age, and all the regrets into old age”. -- Margaret Mead 

On a spring morn bathed in golden light, 
I'm enchanted by the mist, a breathtaking sight, 
Like stairways to heaven, from the lake they rise, 
Utterly spellbound, I wander beneath azure skies. 

Yet wars rage on in lands afar, 
Where freedom falters 'neath a tyrant's star, 
Innocents fall, hostages to greed's cruel deal, 
Utterly disheartened by the leaders' heart of steel. 

But amidst the chaos, wildflowers bloom, 
On the ridge they dance, dispelling gloom, 
Sparrows and swallows in a joyous spree, 
Utterly beautiful, a sight so lovely, it sets the spirit free. 

On a warm afternoon, thoughts drift anew, 
Watch deer and chase turkeys, in sun's warm hue, 
And in quiet repose, my aging frame does rest, 
Utterly, I must write a poem, before I forget.
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La France Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Jay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 2:12 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jay - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful "Utterly" write again. Enjoy your day/win..............
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Hello Jay. This poem is so nicely written and has such imagination - it's lovely. I love the quote from Margaret, as well. Congratulations! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:51 AM
I loved reading your wonderful "Utterly" write.  What a pretty picture. Love the true quote... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day..................
George Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:06 AM
Beautiful poem. You have done full justice to the topic. I like the stanza on war. We are all "Utterly disheartened by the leader' s heart of steel". This is the disappointment of all peace loving men.
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March 18, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Jay….your poem is wonderful in its beautiful imagery and message! “Wildflowers bloom amidst the chaos” just lovely my friend! Debx
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