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Holding my hand guiding me to a garden of roses, He whispered , “spiral your way into the synthetics of voices and noises , Navigate through the patterns of Braille textures “, I held his hand , to only feel the drips of his helplessness , Smiling softly as I gasped into the spring air , The softness of the fresh fragranced petals brushed against my fingers , Feeling the senses running through my veins more than he could ever begin to imagine ,, If only he could see the light in my darkness , And hear the voices in my head , He would not give me the stares of confusion , True that , the mirror seems like nothing but just a word, waking up to a receded eyesight could be every reason to bleed, I found my comfort through the silence of colours , As my heart cried louder in the quiet stillness of the night, The harmonies of the wind , The warmth of the sun and change of tides , Somehow the seasons seems to be more clearer in the shaded shadows, I felt the pain in his tears trying to blend into the rain, Indeed he could fool the ones with vision , For I am no stranger to the constant battles of dark revisions, Though I felt his intricate precision , I held his chest only to hear his sighs and highs , I refused to surrender into the darkness of the blind, Living in the creation of the world in my own mind

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Date: 12/20/2023 8:08:00 AM
I am not one to toss rose petals to the wind, but again, love how you truly convey what lives between a dream and reality without stirring it up with more spices - no need - your passions are swept to our own lives - there is a LOVE movie in this - that leaves the reader in tears and wanting more...WOW - this is one of those "I wish I had written this" writes! soup mail - in a while
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:47:00 PM
Wow! This is really good. A great way to introduce yourself to the soup. A belated welcome.
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Date: 10/1/2023 5:12:00 PM
This had a reckless abandon feel to it, which I loved. It symbolized a "pour your heart out" vibe maybe more than anything else ranked, though it's ironically the last placed poem. But 12 out of 75 ain't too shabby. Really enjoyed this ride.
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Date: 9/17/2023 7:35:00 PM
Keep embracing love and let it radiate from your soul, The Aura Rhymes. Elequent you are, you illuminate in the darkest of night. Subtle and intriquing your poetry. Touched, as your using all senses. Welcome to PS! I Am Anaya
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Date: 9/6/2023 5:00:00 AM
Look at this gorgeous artistry.. the love the romance …. Mmmmmmmm..I held his chest only to hear his sighs and highs … mmm I loove looove this whole piece dahlin
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Date: 9/4/2023 5:19:00 PM
Dear the aura Rhymes, your pensive poem is rich with moving imagery and lovely language that unfolds gracefully upon the poetic page. "I felt the pain in his tears trying to blend into the rain" - so deeply touching. Welcome to PS! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/4/2023 12:24:00 PM
Silence of colors. Come into the light to see the vibrant silence. Excellent. :-)
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:14:00 AM
Excellent poetry, written from the feelings and emotions of one with the courage to create their own reality through their courage to will it so through their mind. "As a man thinketh so is he" ... perfect example. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us through your poetry, The aura Rhymes. Welcome to Poetry Soup! A great first post. I'll be following your poetry. A poet in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/3/2023 7:50:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. A lovely write/story. I wish you would write more. Have a great/blessed ~ day/week writing away.............
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Date: 9/3/2023 7:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/3/2023 6:25:00 AM
A bottomless well of wonderful words, a sad story/poem told so well. Welcome to PoetrySoup… Belle
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Date: 9/3/2023 5:02:00 AM
Hey welcome to poetry soup! Don't think we've met before but I've done a Collab or two with silent one myself. Also Subhadra. Anyway this is a bit melancholy but with a tinge of hope. Looking forward to seeing you around
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The Aura Rhymes
Date: 9/3/2023 5:25:00 AM
I Heard you are a good friend of silent one and my sister . Thank you for the warm welcome
Date: 9/3/2023 1:07:00 AM
This is my favourite poem written by you. It is so beautiful and touching.. Can feel the vulnerability in the words and it is full of great verses..
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