Unconquerable

midst the bosom of a once bountiful farm
lies the graveyard of my ancestors~
the gush of tears that flowed here- only the wind knows;
the willows by the brooks~ are barely there,
and those who survived have so many stories to tell.


still flowing- the Vito river
despite so many summer drought
still limpid on its march to the sea
whilst faded on its parched sands 
my whilom friends' footprints~ 
who ran so fast that time
until youth came elusive in their eyes

the placid breeze now echo 
nostalgic reminiscence
of a once warm abode...

oh, how time devoured the dainty dreams we built
how time entombed unspoken anguish 
on beloved ones' eternal repose...
how time like wind teased our midnight lamps
and yet we lived the night like day~
with so many songs to sing...
with so much love to share...
when taste of life was only sweet.

oh, how we passed the time away~
unmindful of its ticking...
unmindful where did it go

now, as I stand ~ 
in front of these forlorn tombstones
in my hands are stone tablets 
that bear the names of two people
who were once a slave of time;
in peace, they slumbered~
for they finally conquered, 
the unconquerable.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 10:24 PM
Excellent writing here. A well deserved win. Big congrats
Hoffman Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 2:44 PM
Exquisitely written and touching piece. Congrats on your top placement.
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 8:01 PM
Congrats, JCB, for this top placement. Just finished reading this for the first time. I am very touch by this piece. Blessings
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Congrats on your win with this exquisite write, another congrats for topping the top 100 new poems, I'm a fan!
Jones Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 8:34 AM
"the gush of tears that flowed here- only the wind knows" So lovely. Also the line, "oh, how time devoured a thousand dreams we dreamt" Really spoke loudly to me. <3 Well done
Watt Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 11:36 PM
J, this is really quite exquisite writing. Dealing with time and death and loved ones with a healthy dose of wisdom and cherishing life. Your ending line is so wonderful. Congratulations for both your 1st place in the contest and for rising to the top of the Best New Poems list! Enjoy your weekend, my friend ~ John
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Read and loved this poem many times, but late in leaving a comment. Oh JCB, such an enchanting piece! Admired each and every line, every word! To my Faves. Love ~ Mala
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 7:01 PM
this is amazing!! Such a well deserved first place (well, I think I saw somewhere here that you got first place) This is most profound. FAVE.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 5:47 AM
“oh, how time devoured a thousand dreams we dreamt” a wonderful line of many in this beautiful write JCB, congratulations on your win in the contest, so deserved, well done... Belle
Dome Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 1:22 AM
wonderful and so poetic. beautiful. well done.Pete.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 11:07 PM
A truly remarkable poem, JCB!! The emotion burns like a night torch of emotional intensity waiting for the morning star. Superb poetry. May love light your path in life.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Hello JCB Burl, it is always interesting to visit a historical because there is lots of history there. enjoy your day my friend.
Dome Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 10:13 AM
I can see you put your heart and soul into this. what wonderful but sad words.Well done. excellent.
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 9:54 PM
Congratulations on your win with this exquisite work. It's a Fave for me. :)
Roper Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 6:22 PM
Enjoyed reading , congratulations on your win in Constance contest. Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Enjoyed reading your winner. Very descriptive of life and death. Congrats on your winner. Sara
Ashley Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:10 PM
JCB, it is such a pleasure for me to return to your exceptional poem with my best congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. I loved reading this piece again, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Watt Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry, J. 'Oh, how time devoured a thousand dreams we dreamt' speaks volumes. A very touching ending, the freedom of two who were once a slave to time. Congratulations on this most deserving win ~ John
Lamoureux Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:21 AM
I can see why this received a high placement. Congrats.
La France Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 2:03 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my Quote Inspired Contest with this excellent poem _Constance
Crabtree Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 9:26 PM
I love the quote and the poem, JCB. You're right. Time waits for no one. Hope you have a great weekend :)
Ashley Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 7:43 PM
Wow! Dear poetess, JCB, magnificence flows from your golden pen. This wistful memoir takes my breath away with its textured imagery, metaphoric beauty and with tears glisten in-eyes-looking-back despite the smile of "nostalgic reminiscence" when the "taste of life was only sweet". I loved "how time like wind teased our midnight lamps" - and - "how we passed the time away~ unmindful of its ticking...unmindful where did it go" -exquisite! I adore this piece and admire the your artistry. Read this gem several times to absorb the water-colored memories. A Fav! Your last line is a grand finale to an inspired and inspiring poem. Gorgeous poetry!! Best wishes for a win, my gifted friend.. ~Susan
Downing  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 6:54 PM
I really really enjoy reading this, it’s beautiful and inspiring. Kudos, JCB, and all the best in the contest :)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 4:33 PM
Beautifully inspired and inspirational, a heart flowing with crimson floods from a pen caught by veins filled with your muse. God bless you with many more wonders
One Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 12:46 PM
I see you were inspired by the quote... Your vocabulary is also improving
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