Too Soon

Too Soon

Do very youthful men and women fret
About the ill success of dreams they’ve dreamt?
They barely have begun to even whet
Their lust for life! I think they are exempt 
a mere while yet from lessons to be learnt.
They’ll bill and coo before spring season’s spent.
Then soon, and summer-touched, they will be burnt.
And finally, they’ll look back and lament
how weariness, like fog, has come to fall
upon them from a drizzly sky once gold
with April’s hope and not November’s pall.
Beneath Spring’s gilded skies, their growing old
is but a road stretched far in front of them.
Too soon will come cold winter’s requiem.

(Below is the poem that inspired it)

“Age”  by Sara Teasdale

Brooks sing in the spring
And in the summer cease;
I who sang in my youth
Now hold my peace;
Youth is a noisy stream
Chattering over the ground.
But the sad wisdom of age
Wells up without a sound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:49 PM
A beautiful Sonnet, Andrea, with strong metaphors and wisdom. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ~
Canerdy Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 8:59 AM
I LOVE it! Congrats on your win, Andrea. "Sad wisdom"--yes . . . Janice
Garcia Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:20 AM
I've read so many great poems you've written and i think this might be one of my favorites. It's so smooth, just kinda rolls off the tongue. It was a stacked contest for sure and I hope you're exceedingly proud of this piece
Kimathi Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 6:37 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
Y. Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Hi Andrea, Now this is a great sonnet. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Arnone Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 10:19 PM
What can I say, Andrea -- you know how to'write a sonnet. Splendid. Congrats! :-)
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:34 PM
This is simply great writing congrats Andrea hope you are well these days!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Lovely sonnet. Congratulations.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 7:11 PM
Lovely, Andrea!
Haight Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 6:28 PM
A beautifully Sonnet, Andrea, written in the Sara Teasdale style. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
Salehi Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations Andrea... this beautiful..
Callus Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Beautiful, Andrea! That's life for you (and me!), but I could not have said it as well as you did! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Congrats, Andrea! I love your style. And yes, too soon... You have inspired me to read some Sara Teasdale; having grown up with another native language, I am not familiar with her work.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:06 PM
This should make you feel much better about your recent N/A. My entry got an N/A in this contest! I can relate. Congratulations on your win Andrea! ; ) 7
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Nice, Andrea, I love this style congratulations on your fantastic win with the Seeker!!!! Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Nice one Andrea.... SKAT
Tor Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:20 PM
Very well done Andrea. Beautiful Sonnet. The years fly by in the twinkling of an eye.
Dunn Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:31 PM
Dear Andrea Yes age makes one think about the shortness of our lives, how fast it passes by does time, it seems just the other day you were young and full of the dreams of life, all the bucket lists things you once wished to do are so far from your reach now, but the only limitations are the ones we place upon ourselves, within our imagination the possiblities are endless, so close your eyes and dream my friend, here the road never ends, cheri
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Yes, Andrea, how soon the years catch up with youth when they believe their "winter" is so far away. Excellent Sonnet with words of wisdom and a perfect echo of your inspired poem, "Age." Congrats on your fine win! Sandra
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:24 AM
This piece flows into the seasons with such ease. A wonderful write.
Walker Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Great sonnet sis.
Smith Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Life passes in the blink of an eye. Leave no regrets. Chase your dreams
Nunez Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:59 PM
You really do well when you use sonnet, Andie, perfect with the subject of aging. Congrats on your awesome win! hugs!
Anish Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:59 PM
More people should read Sara Teasdale - she is one of our mostly forgotten poetesses. Your poem echoes the same theme in grand fashion. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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