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Too Soon Do very youthful men and women fret About the ill success of dreams they’ve dreamt? They barely have begun to even whet Their lust for life! I think they are exempt a mere while yet from lessons to be learnt. They’ll bill and coo before spring season’s spent. Then soon, and summer-touched, they will be burnt. And finally, they’ll look back and lament how weariness, like fog, has come to fall upon them from a drizzly sky once gold with April’s hope and not November’s pall. Beneath Spring’s gilded skies, their growing old is but a road stretched far in front of them. Too soon will come cold winter’s requiem. (Below is the poem that inspired it) “Age” by Sara Teasdale Brooks sing in the spring And in the summer cease; I who sang in my youth Now hold my peace; Youth is a noisy stream Chattering over the ground. But the sad wisdom of age Wells up without a sound.

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Date: 11/11/2016 7:49:00 PM
A beautiful Sonnet, Andrea, with strong metaphors and wisdom. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/10/2016 6:06:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ~
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Date: 11/9/2016 8:59:00 AM
I LOVE it! Congrats on your win, Andrea. "Sad wisdom"--yes . . . Janice
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:20:00 AM
I've read so many great poems you've written and i think this might be one of my favorites. It's so smooth, just kinda rolls off the tongue. It was a stacked contest for sure and I hope you're exceedingly proud of this piece
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Date: 8/29/2016 6:37:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/28/2016 11:16:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Now this is a great sonnet. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/27/2016 10:19:00 PM
What can I say, Andrea -- you know how to'write a sonnet. Splendid. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 8/27/2016 9:34:00 PM
This is simply great writing congrats Andrea hope you are well these days!
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Date: 8/27/2016 8:20:00 PM
Lovely sonnet. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/27/2016 7:11:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea!
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Date: 8/27/2016 6:28:00 PM
A beautifully Sonnet, Andrea, written in the Sara Teasdale style. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/27/2016 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea... this beautiful..
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Date: 8/27/2016 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea! That's life for you (and me!), but I could not have said it as well as you did! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/27/2016 5:21:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea! I love your style. And yes, too soon... You have inspired me to read some Sara Teasdale; having grown up with another native language, I am not familiar with her work.
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Date: 8/27/2016 5:06:00 PM
This should make you feel much better about your recent N/A. My entry got an N/A in this contest! I can relate. Congratulations on your win Andrea! ; ) 7
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Date: 8/27/2016 4:56:00 PM
Nice, Andrea, I love this style congratulations on your fantastic win with the Seeker!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:11:00 PM
Nice one Andrea.... SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 9:20:00 PM
Very well done Andrea. Beautiful Sonnet. The years fly by in the twinkling of an eye.
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Date: 10/2/2015 6:31:00 PM
Dear Andrea Yes age makes one think about the shortness of our lives, how fast it passes by does time, it seems just the other day you were young and full of the dreams of life, all the bucket lists things you once wished to do are so far from your reach now, but the only limitations are the ones we place upon ourselves, within our imagination the possiblities are endless, so close your eyes and dream my friend, here the road never ends, cheri
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Date: 10/2/2015 2:17:00 PM
Yes, Andrea, how soon the years catch up with youth when they believe their "winter" is so far away. Excellent Sonnet with words of wisdom and a perfect echo of your inspired poem, "Age." Congrats on your fine win! Sandra
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Date: 10/2/2015 9:24:00 AM
This piece flows into the seasons with such ease. A wonderful write.
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Date: 10/2/2015 8:59:00 AM
Great sonnet sis.
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Date: 10/1/2015 6:24:00 PM
Life passes in the blink of an eye. Leave no regrets. Chase your dreams
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:59:00 PM
More people should read Sara Teasdale - she is one of our mostly forgotten poetesses. Your poem echoes the same theme in grand fashion. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/1/2015 4:59:00 PM
You really do well when you use sonnet, Andie, perfect with the subject of aging. Congrats on your awesome win! hugs!
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