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The Story Teller

A program is pending. Kids are milling around,
ending the day on the fall afternoon.
A pamphlet about war is displayed on each desk, 
ignored by the class, who are restless, at best.

Just a few books are opened, at the teacher's request
There's a strange mix of whispering, laughter, and squirming.
Chairs have been scooted to make extra room
No one much caring that a speaker is due.
They are just in a hurry to finish the day.
To leave with their friends, get on with their lives…..
The noise in the room hums like bees in hive

A guest soon appears, without much fanfare
Slow is his gait, from a limp.  And they stare
how it takes him a moment to gather his words.
His gaze drifts away, to something reserved
His face marked of age, furrows deeply endowed
But, as his story unfolds, ...and the quiet takes hold,
all the air in the classroom is breathless and cold. 

And so,.. left behind are scars of the truth
that will mark them forever, give them a cruel
lesson of life, lesson of death, lesson of courage, and much more respect
This was not just a movie, a book or a tale
But truth beyond fiction, a story of hell
The remains of his youth, are now left in their hands
to change what could happen, and never forget

With far-away eyes, and with sage not denied
The frail little man has made the room cry
Their tears brim with outrage, compassion and vows
The room has gone silent,  but his light will shine on

The dust motes have settled, sun silvers his hair
Enlightenment enters where dark once appeared
The world at the window is now theirs to own
Somehow grown older……..they watch the man go
with the tears of their sorrow, on a fall afternoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Oh my, you are so good at your story telling, CArrie. This is a very well deserved win. A SEVEN
La France Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Carrie beautifully written by you a gifted storyteller too...congratulations on your win
May Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:09 PM
The "scars of the truth" sear the mind with the horror that occurred...Congrats on your win
Roper Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:54 PM
I love the description of the room you painted and the scooting of the chairs..."The noise in the room hums like bees in a hive" , "But truth beyond fiction, a story of hell" children are so impressionable. :'( congratulations on your win .. Hugs Eve
Mark Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Great storytelling in verse Carrie, you roll this out and let the reader be that child, no details required just the terrible blank spaces that history has taught us....eerily beautiful write, ...I seriously envy your style ...Ian x
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Interesting write. Very moving and sorrowful. Congratulations on your placement.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Great is the story, the story of survival, the cruelty of life. Great!
Wigley Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Beautifully written, a great interpretation on a tricky theme, Carrie. I'm sure you'll do well. Viv x
Hoffman Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 9:05 PM
Very nice Carrie, can just imagine the students listening awe-struck by what the man tells them about how he survived the Holocaust! G/L in the contest!:)
Parker Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Love the story, ..it would take a man such as this to reach young students... you're from a family of teachers ..both my sons are teachers..
Richards Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 8:23 PM
Thank you for stopping by Frederic, and the compliment . As coincidence...both of my sons are also teachers (High School...one teaches the Sciences... the other son teaches both English and Math. My brother is also a retired teacher. It runs in our family !! :) Good for your sons...we need good teachers !!!
Bauer Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:46 PM
this is wonderful, carrie! i didn't realize it was for a contest (until the end) but i was thinking all through the poem that this was about a holocaust survivor. i volunteer at a holocaust museum in manhattan and the most powerful experiences people have involve meeting survivors. seeing those numbers on someone's arm always has a profound effect on me. you've captured that so well in your poem...
Richards Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 8:09 PM
I can't imagine the emotions or how touched you must be to work and meet these amazing survivors, Ilene. I think my heart would burst with such an honor. Thank you for sharing :)
P  Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Made my heart cry, well written. Last verse is my favorite. Are you a teacher perchance?
P  Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:52 PM
I knew it! :)
Richards Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Paloma for the compliment :) I am from a family of teachers..... you are perceptive !!
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