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The Revenge of the Witch

They killed her lover. She just could not forget. The raven circled thrice around the old oak, But settle silently on her wide shoulders. Dark was the raven, dark the woman’s dress Dark the environment, all dark except for The glowing sanguine hair that fluttered in the breeze. She stood tall in front of the old sparsely lit castle. No eerie sound echoed in the dark corridors, No black candles lit any of the bleak rooms. Only ravens cawed huskily as they flew Around the tall turrets or rested on ugly gargoyles. The dark woman moved towards the main door. Her eyes glowed in a flaming carmine power. She looked up towards the ugly low clouds. Power exuded from her and the storm began. Electricity snaked down and hit the upper balustrades. Hellish fire sprang up and soon the castle was in ruins. Revenge completed, she turned and walked silently away. One day they’ll burn her at a stake. She shrugged. She was not afraid of death. The crow cawed hoarsely.

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Date: 1/25/2022 1:44:00 AM
An eerie atmosphere you have masterfully created ! The lady in black, the revengeful witch has left a sense of horror !
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Date: 11/3/2021 3:33:00 PM
A great write for the season, her revenge has rained down upon that castle; she definitely got her revenge. A good write.
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Date: 11/2/2021 6:50:00 PM
Spooky splendor Victor! hugs
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:28:00 AM
A dark tale of a dark witch in dark times. Very nicely done Victor :) Linda
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Date: 10/30/2021 2:10:00 PM
Great Halloween poem, Victor.
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Date: 10/30/2021 1:42:00 PM
Ravens usually add a scary and dark undertone to a poem, Well crafted
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Date: 10/30/2021 1:27:00 PM
Ooohoohoohoo! A great tale for Halloween. Actually a great beginning for a short story. Wonderful imagery. As always a wonderful write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/30/2021 4:06:00 AM
Witches can be quite brave and fierce, they don't fear dying as much as others do, lol, mom was born on Christmas Eve according to folklore she was a witch, to my eyes she was most powerful, strapped with Jesus's birthday, and courage , she never did anything wrong to my eyes, great write Victor :)
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Date: 10/29/2021 5:54:00 PM
A fright write for Halloween Victor, the witches revenge will never end, a woman scorned- be warned.. Belle
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Date: 10/29/2021 5:33:00 PM
Ooooo, eerie Halloween witch, nicely done...Delice
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Date: 10/29/2021 10:56:00 AM
A scary and fun poem, Victor. Your superb dark imagery makes this poem a delight. :)
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Date: 10/29/2021 8:15:00 AM
As dark as Edgar Allen Poe's poetry, Victor, love the haunting narrative story:)
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Date: 10/29/2021 6:55:00 AM
perfect spooky Halloween tale victor, well penned:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/29/2021 6:21:00 AM
Well done, Victor! The nonchalant “ One day they’ll burn her at a stake. She shrugged.”
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Date: 10/29/2021 6:07:00 AM
Dark tale, apt for the season, Victor. She had no choice after what they did to her lover. You are a great story teller.
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Date: 10/29/2021 1:08:00 AM
Reminds me of witchcraft by the monk Milarepa ~ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Milarepa?wprov=sfti1
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Date: 10/29/2021 8:13:00 AM
Ah! Anticipating your response, I’ve provided the wiki link, you have to click on the link however!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/29/2021 1:26:00 AM
Never heard of him!
Date: 10/29/2021 1:04:00 AM
Quite a spooky tale Victor, perfect for Halloween. Tom
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