The Revenge of the Witch

They killed her lover.  She just could not forget.

The raven circled thrice around the old oak,
But settle silently on her wide shoulders.
Dark was the raven, dark the woman’s dress
Dark the environment, all dark except for
The glowing sanguine hair that fluttered in the breeze.

She stood tall in front of the old sparsely lit castle.
No eerie sound echoed in the dark corridors,
No black candles lit any of the bleak rooms.
Only ravens cawed huskily as they flew 
Around the tall turrets or rested on ugly gargoyles.

The dark woman moved towards the main door.
Her eyes glowed in a flaming carmine power.
She looked up towards the ugly low clouds.
Power exuded from her and the storm began.
Electricity snaked down and hit the upper balustrades.
Hellish fire sprang up and soon the castle was in ruins.
Revenge completed, she turned and walked silently away.

One day they’ll burn her at a stake.  She shrugged.
She was not afraid of death. The crow cawed hoarsely.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 1:44 AM
An eerie atmosphere you have masterfully created ! The lady in black, the revengeful witch has left a sense of horror !
Kiser Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 3:33 PM
A great write for the season, her revenge has rained down upon that castle; she definitely got her revenge. A good write.
Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Spooky splendor Victor! hugs
Fowler Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:28 AM
A dark tale of a dark witch in dark times. Very nicely done Victor :) Linda
Roper Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 2:10 PM
Great Halloween poem, Victor.
May Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Ravens usually add a scary and dark undertone to a poem, Well crafted
Ball Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Ooohoohoohoo! A great tale for Halloween. Actually a great beginning for a short story. Wonderful imagery. As always a wonderful write. God Bless, JB
Rose  Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 4:06 AM
Witches can be quite brave and fierce, they don't fear dying as much as others do, lol, mom was born on Christmas Eve according to folklore she was a witch, to my eyes she was most powerful, strapped with Jesus's birthday, and courage , she never did anything wrong to my eyes, great write Victor :)
Edmonds  Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:54 PM
A fright write for Halloween Victor, the witches revenge will never end, a woman scorned- be warned.. Belle
Skelly Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Ooooo, eerie Halloween witch, nicely done...Delice
Buehler Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 10:56 AM
A scary and fun poem, Victor. Your superb dark imagery makes this poem a delight. :)
Daniel Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 8:15 AM
As dark as Edgar Allen Poe's poetry, Victor, love the haunting narrative story:)
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:55 AM
perfect spooky Halloween tale victor, well penned:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Well done, Victor! The nonchalant “ One day they’ll burn her at a stake. She shrugged.”
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:07 AM
Dark tale, apt for the season, Victor. She had no choice after what they did to her lover. You are a great story teller.
Seeker Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 1:08 AM
Reminds me of witchcraft by the monk Milarepa ~ https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Milarepa?wprov=sfti1
Seeker Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Ah! Anticipating your response, I’ve provided the wiki link, you have to click on the link however!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 1:26 AM
Never heard of him!
Cunningham Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 1:04 AM
Quite a spooky tale Victor, perfect for Halloween. Tom
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