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On the plains in the Texas panhandle The fight for survival is real As I watched from the derrick On a short smoke break A scene rather harsh and surreal A cottontail bunny was having his way In a pasture of gold knee high grass When a hungry coyote, prowling late in the day Caught his scent on the breeze as it passed The bunny must have sensed, the coyote was near He ran circles and made figure 8 bows Confusing the canine, wound up chasing his tail While the bunny escaped down the road But nature has a way of being quite cruel As a hawk observed from above As he swooped down, the poor bunny froze In a scene void of malice and love With the rabbit in tow, still kicking and screaming The hawk not making a sound Somehow lost his grip, dropping his prey Who died instantly hitting the ground In all the commotion, the old coyote Had watched and raced to the kill Snatching him up and never looking back Running swiftly over a hill I stood there amazed, as the scene played out This microcosm of struggles and strife Then thought about destiny, no matter how hard you fight The unfairness and the fragility of life by Daniel Turner

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Date: 6/15/2017 10:07:00 PM
Wow! If true, this is the stuff of YouTube
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Date: 5/19/2017 5:50:00 AM
Oh My Goodness Daniel. Good Morning. This entry is well thought out in construction and composition. There is much attention to detail. What a moment in time for life and for nature. Your words tell the story. Well done in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning.
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Date: 3/19/2017 1:53:00 PM
Indeed... We are all rabbits trying to survive. The first law of living, LIFE IS HARD. My kind of story DT.
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Date: 3/8/2017 11:09:00 AM
This tells a great story of nature; very cruel, yet quite profound. Nicely done!
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:26:00 PM
Daniel, Dan, Danny - THIS IS GREAT, TRULY IMPRESSIVE - just so well written, perfect flow and an impressive story. I'm absolutely in love with each stanza. I'm clapping - just thrilled with this poem. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 2/18/2017 12:54:00 PM
I LOVE THE GREAT PICTURE, AND THE POEM EVEN MORE! Nature is my favorite subject to write about. You've delivered a masterpiece on that subject in my opinion. A7 Also a fav...
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Date: 2/17/2017 1:48:00 PM
The battle for survival is a tough one..Very nicely penned Daniel
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph:)
Date: 2/17/2017 11:47:00 AM
You have a great sense of observation, Danny....being in the right spot at the right time. Can't help feeling sorry for the victim, but that's life! Regards // paul
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2017 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. How does the saying go? "If God had not intended for them to be sheared, he would not have made them sheep"
Date: 2/17/2017 9:47:00 AM
We are one with nature Daniel...and your verse one with us...great write my old friend...god bless...^WW^
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, Wingman:)
Date: 2/17/2017 9:09:00 AM
Another beautifully written piece
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thank you, Mike. Have a great weekend:)
Date: 2/17/2017 9:00:00 AM
Very thought provoking and beautifully expressed Daniel. Life is fragile and nature can be a dangerous place, but it is what it is and all we can do is make the best of what we have been given.
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:15:00 AM
I understand the food chain. Life is and always will be survival of the fittest. Thank you, Chris:)
Date: 2/17/2017 6:07:00 AM
Excellent DT... Excellent
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/17/2017 10:11:00 AM
Sometime after lunch and one more therapy session
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2017 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Tim. They letting you go home today?
Date: 2/17/2017 2:42:00 AM
Last two lines....genius. Definitely a 7
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth:) Have a great weekend.
Date: 2/17/2017 2:18:00 AM
- A great poem but it gives me sad pictures, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:08:00 AM
I'm sorry, Anne-Lise. I would have loved to keep the little bunny alive but that was not his destiny. Thank you for the friendly visit and have a top shelf weekend:)
Date: 2/17/2017 12:28:00 AM
life is exceptionally fragile.
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:06:00 AM
Yes it is, Jolene. Thank you for the friendly visit. have a great weekend.
Date: 2/16/2017 11:12:00 PM
Had to come to Texas for this exceptional inspiration eh? It paid off, great work DT...
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:02:00 AM
Home of mesquite trees, diamondbacks and oil wells. I also love the horny toads:) Thanks Charlie. Have a great weekend:)
Date: 2/16/2017 9:52:00 PM
Great observation, sad story. "The unfairness and fragility of life" indeed. Good write, Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Mrs Agnes:)
Date: 2/16/2017 9:35:00 PM
I love this poem and I must conform to the last two verses of your poem. wonderfully penned.. :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Stephany:)

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