The Bleeding

I flung my bloodied bathrobe onto a dusty mahogany bureau and roared: “Did we frighten
the scarecrows tonight, my love? Whose catch was it anyway? Yours or mine? We invited 10
guests to our dungeon this evening. Ten unfortunates who needed to be bled! Ten minus nine
equals one. Why does this one? Why does this last invalid remain? He’s your responsibility!” 

I apologize. You see, my wife and I like to play games. Clever games played without
civilized anecdotes. Virginia Woolf-esque games; ordinary puzzles not usually toyed with at
tight-lipped Connecticut Sunday social club gatherings. Scrabble? Clue? The Game of Life?
No. Monopoly. Excuse me, monopolize. "Where do we go from here, cupcake? The scheme of
ignorance is arguably apparent. You bait them with your soiled undies and I lure them in with
feigned smiles and gin-laden breath. That was our Holy Grail, pumpkin! Our pact. Yes? So
why are you deliberately side-stepping the strategy?” Martha was not amused. She coughed,
groped a crumpled Marlboro, slowly slugged down the dregs of her scotch and bellowed: “I know
the game, lovey! I shake the dice! Light my cigarette, lover. The disappointed usually do.” 

“So what? Hey, George…look, they burned, braised and boiled us. They lied. They deceived. 
One whore! One lawyer! One philanthropist! Two misogynists! They tried to destroy us, right?
Then what? WHAT? I married you. Sure, they all deserved the cleavers and the nooses and
the revenge. But, they needed the invite! It’s part of the game! My game! They were weak and
useless and expendable. Everyone's a LIAR! Everyday a little death?” We both stared at
each other with contempt. “I’m not liking this game anymore, buttercup; now make yourself
useful and pass me the ice bucket.” 

“And why isn’t the last one eating daisies, my love? The tall one. The sort of handsome
chap. Ten were invited in and indeed ten shall exit.” Martha silently poured herself
another scotch. She laughed wildly as she fumbled into the pocket of her bathrobe. 
“George…ten entered and ten will exit! That was our plan?” A single gunshot. One more. 
Martha spits and yawns. “You didn’t look at the clues, George. Did you fail to read the rules? 
One man’s whore is another woman’s philanthropist. Everyone’s a liar…like two peas in a pod. 
You skipped over the boundaries, George. I kept my promise. 
Ten entered. Ten exited. I never said who or how. It was my playground, George! 
It was always my charade! Clue? Game over, sweetheart. GAME OVER!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Makama Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 3:56 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
Song Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 3:02 PM
This is like a short story about a game of Clue. I think this is one of your greatest works! The characters are delightful and you play cat and mouse with them so well. gwendolen
Mister Roboto Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:42 AM
This is for me! Yes! ~JS Lambert
Wegenast Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 1:13 AM
Great Job! This tale had me reading as fast as I could from the first sentence, excellent description and tempo.
Johnson Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 1:16 PM
A grim tale indeed. Soup mail
Pettit Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. Very descriptive. No wonder it garnered first place.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 11:47 AM
thankxx John for enjoying and choosing my entry "Plea for Love" for your Dear John contest as one of your winners ... much appreciated ... my hubby and I are in Hawaii this weekend to see the Pro Bowl football game and have some fun in the Sun.. am working on trying to extend a few more days... wish me luck luv..thankxxx...
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Haick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Wow! And to think I would've missed this! It's been ages since I read any of your writes..a bit dark for me but still I kind of enjoyed reading it...As always, impressive and enjoyable. Thanks for your help, John.. 'twas really appreciated! Always, Annalise
Bagnall Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 5:15 AM
Congrats - scary place your mind !
Muzzey Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your honored first place win with this wonderfully written prose. I enjoyed the read. Again, great job! Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Congrats John on your wonderful first place win in Catie's Dark Prose contest with this spectacular and sensational write my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
George   Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 5:30 AM
Absolutely brilliant as always, John. So nice to hear from you, and thank you so much for your kind comments; they mean so much to me. I, like you, don't visited the soup much these days...busy writing a screenplay. Wishing you great success in all your endeavours in the New Year . Warm hugs to you my friend. Elaine
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on the first place in the contest, John
Brown Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations to you for your 1st Place win John in Catie Lindsey's contest "Dark Prose". Love, Carol
Walsh Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 4:20 AM
'Wow' fantastical stuff - congrats on your win - well deserved - Gosh! Liz
Pettit Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:38 PM
You just might have material good enough to write scripts for television shows here! No wonder this was chosen as the best in the contest!
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:11 PM
GOOD story, John. Those women will do ya in every time! Congrats on your wonderful win. The story was thoroughly entertaining! Luv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 6:13 PM
I'm watching Richard and Liz pulling hair, and spouting off at each other all over again!!! Excellent, and clever, and daring....as only you could do....terrific, and well deserving to be at Number UN0 !!! So nice to see you back , John!!
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January 14, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on taking first place in Catie's contest, John! Best wishes, Carolyn
A   Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 3:54 PM
brilliant John, I guess George could have been much fun than we know .. Nice little story.. Sweet Martha, putting up with it.. the game~ sounds interesting.. now wheres the apple tree.. kidding.. enjoyed your entry. Good luck,..p.d.
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January 14, 2011 at 3:32 PM
WOw John, this is so rich in poetry... your are a excellent story teller and poet...thank you for sharing....Michael
Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Good luck in the contest..reads like a sure winner...Sara
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