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The Bell Tower That Leaned In 

Daniel Henry Rodgers

 

“the bell tower does not lament, it abides, a witness—each stillness a reliquary, each resonance a revenant of what was left unsaid” – Poet
 

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I. The Pastor’s Hand At dawn’s brittle cusp— he climbs, each step a nail in time’s coffin breath ragged a Psalm torn mid-hymn. The rope tastes of incense and myrrh— Liberty’s fracture braided through its fibers a wound that never quite healed. He pulls— clang— a bell toll from Poe’s cathedral of despair a hymn of blood-ink and rusted breath. The shadows coil; scripture frays. Faith flickers— does anyone still hear? Each toll an exorcism. Each silence— reproof. II. The Town’s Celebration Midnight’s spine splinters— rockets scream like seraphim undone. The bell convulses in bronze jubilee a copper throat ruptured with Hemingway’s dread. “For whom,” it mutters beneath the blaze— but no one listens. Children suck sweetness from sulphur lovers cling beneath the clang, their shadows etched in cobblestone fog. Old men raise cracked chalices— liquid memories. The tower disrobes. It dances. It bleeds. III. The Lovers’ Tryst (overlapping the Pastor’s sermon) Here— the world blurs to charcoal. They carve names in limestone flesh a scar older than forgiveness. Their memories thread the bell’s unspoken prayer— a psalm of mouths and ink-stained breath. It does not toll. It listens. Their hearts throb against the rusted must pulses striking time like flint against flint. Below— the town melts into watercolors. Moonlight spills like wine over copper skin. The past folds like origami cranes left in rain. IV. The Tourist’s View He climbs— camera held as relic or rosary. Light breaks between lancet panes. Streets below: runes, scars, equations. He speaks the town aloud— each name an invocation. He is dizzy with witness. The bell does not toll. It withholds. The silence is not absence— It is prophecy. V. The Final Ascent (voices blur — Pastor fades, Lovers pulse, Town distorts) Night, hollowed to bone. Hands claw at stone: brittle gospel. The rope— untouched. The bell— unswung, waiting. He climbs through the relics of devotion— Vows crumbling in lichen. Prayers wrapped in rust. The bell looms— a maw of iron swallowing liturgy and hallelujahs alike. No blessing. No rebuke. He steps beyond breath. The bell does not toll— but the tower leans inward. Not in judgment. Not in mourning. In final witness. VI. Metapoetic Echo (outside the tower, outside time) The bell tolls still— not in bronze or rope or lung but in the trembling script of memory. This poem folds itself around the silence echo chasing echo word chasing wound. A bell is a mouth. A poem, too. Both toll. Neither forgets. VII. The Universal Toll For whom does it toll when time buckles under relics? The tower holds us all— pastor, mourner lover, pilgrim birth, life death. The bell answers not with clang— but with heartbeat muse word. The toll is not theirs. It is ours. It has always been.

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Date: 7/9/2025 2:51:00 AM
Dearest Daniel, this poem left me breathless. The way you've captured the bell's presence and the stories it holds is hauntingly beautiful. Each section is like a piece of art, and the way they fit together is just masterful. I felt like I was right there with the pastor, the lovers, and the tourist, experiencing the weight of history and emotion. The ending is very thoughtfully deep, "The tower holds us all—pastor,....death". You're a brilliant poet, so glad you are back, welcome back :) Hugs
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Date: 7/8/2025 12:28:00 PM
This is a highly spiritual piece. It hit like the bell in the tower. You write with such emotion and power, Daniel. Always you give us something to remember and think about and take with us, a truth. I love how you seemed to hint that the bell's muse is poetry-
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Date: 7/8/2025 12:22:00 PM
Fascinating point(s) of view you present here. The last stanza of part 1 is of interest. At one time it was thought the clanging of church bells warded off evil spirits. My fave part is the lover's tryst in the bell tower. Sounds like something I might have done as a teen. Glad to see you back and at it Daniel
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