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Agape brain, there is a deep abyss, dull and endless. But, I'm falling, acquiring whatever may be blessedness. Conversely, there is only a void, and I am doomed. Daily life's pull resembles a tornado baiting my wound. Even though there is no sound, I am ill-suited to scream. Feel no insight to view and discern nothing how to deem. Geared on a rugged edge, gazing down into despair. Hence, it occurred; it concealed my hopes; the grave is drear. Icily stare at a bettor way of never-ending sadness. Joined arms reaching blurring light in a dying awareness. Keep Plunge pale pungent earthquake whirlwind. Lower your prospering limbs into the swaying water bind. Masterpiece danced through the corridors alike a butterfly. Nettle-picking and stone-pounding on a blustery pathway Obscured in the shadows, the gold gust lines are blurring. Prepared for shivering haggles and raging lightning. Quiet sound of trees swinging and branches underneath. Rebuke mayhem would not include a flower wreath. Sailing on foamy waves, under wrapping arm of windless. Through the sand, grains climb a hole of nothingness. Underneath, a dark opening has dove into the obscurity. Vituperations venoms are heaped by shadow melancholy. When the nightfall bar sparkles with a silver shine. Xylene's pit dubs me currently, similar to alarm's whine. Yield not too eerie dangers concealed in evil dream trend. Zone time limit point of life warns I am drawn to my end.
Written: December 07, 2021 ''A'' Forms, New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/31/2021 4:32:00 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with your wonderfully penned poem and I love the image too ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Date: 12/31/2021 5:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance, I appreciate your kindness for reading and placing my poem. My best wishes for a happy and healthy new year.
Date: 12/23/2021 9:11:00 AM
Wow! Lasaad, You've penned an excellent and meaningful entry for the contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2021 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "The Awakening Abyss" is a wonderful ABC write and picture. Your pen was writing over time on this one. Have a Blessed Christmas...............
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:28:00 AM
Great ABC on The Awakening Abyss. Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/22/2021 7:25:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this---and yes, for informatively and creatively exposing abyss' reality in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
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Date: 12/8/2021 4:58:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, Lassad. Strong entry. Bill
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Date: 12/8/2021 4:16:00 PM
WoW! Food for thought my friend. These words are so filled with despair. Any who try to get through this life without the help of The Savior is doomed. A very thought provoking piece. God Bless, JB PS Love the pic. JB
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Date: 12/8/2021 3:45:00 PM
oh wow, about halfway through I realized you were doing ABC style. They are so hard to do. Lots of creative imagery in your poem,Lasaad.
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Date: 12/8/2021 2:04:00 PM
A rich and deep thought provoking verse Lasaad, I sense a great feeling of doom in your words. So well written, I know this will do well. Tom
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Date: 12/8/2021 6:23:00 AM
One should ponder well on your poem so full of imagery and choice of words.
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Date: 12/7/2021 11:53:00 PM
Sailing on the waves of your awakening abyss reaching the end of the Abc.. but the taste and the power of so rich an inner journey.. the wealth of an impressive imagery.. the profuseness of your glossary.. the effectiveness of your thoughts remain in an avid reader's soul and mind.. An amazing rendition that shakes and enlightens.. Your poetic work, Lasaad, is worthy of being acknowledged and honoured.. an immense delight to read.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 12/7/2021 9:17:00 PM
A fascinating piece of writing, Lasaad, rich in images and exciting lines for pondering. Thanks for sharing!
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