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When tongue is silent, but muse is chanting - that's poetry. When we write what the heart has been asking - that's poetry. As dawn's hues glisten golden rays, in blue, bronze, orange skies, musings mirror daydreams, so enchanting - that's poetry. Butterflies smooch cosmos, as bees sip on dahlias nectar. Scents of deep red roses start enhancing - that's poetry. Clement air pleasantly overwhelms with pleasures of love, muse becomes a bard lost in romancing - that's poetry. Mentality turns dark when clouds spread densely like ash smoke. Scarlet ink screams tears to stop storms advancing - that's poetry. In shades of loneliness, thoughts reach out to our loyal moon, beneath her moonlight we sojourn, standing - that's poetry. A heart is healed by spoken words composed with compassion. Poets smile when they see sad lips laughing - that's poetry. As sands of sorrow pause, soul glows like a million fireflies. Nature's metaphors leave our pens dancing - that's poetry. Stale ink dehydrates and thoughts become segments of cement, mind is a machine, where words keep jamming - that's poetry. Daylight or night, bed, bath or driving, lyricists inspired by sunshine, snow or when rain is lashing - that's poetry. Word weavers scribbling sonnets, free verse and poetic prose, forming imagery instead of ranting - that's poetry Silent One, writes to honour Rumi, Shakespeare and Wordsworth, In hope my words will be everlasting - that's poetry. The Silent One 29 August 2020 An example for the Ghazal contest. This Ghazal has a two worded refrain. Slightly different in format to previous ghazal, I posted, called 'Only the moon understands.' This one has 14 syllables each line. There are different definitions for a Ghazal, and different interpretations of the from. Ghazal poetry is poetry of longing. Traditionally, the ghazal tended to focus on unattainable love, often illicit, or sometimes on metaphysical questions. But, today, the ghazal has broadened to touch many types of longing and loss. The ghazal is a form poem that uses the art of rhyme and repetition. As it is originally a Persian form and the Indian subcontinent, the refrain and rhyme can be lost when translated to English, as is the meter.

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Date: 11/16/2020 7:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. These are somewhat hard to write but yours is excellent. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2020 11:45:00 PM
Read both your poems earlier and forgot to leave a comment... excellent examples.
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Date: 9/8/2020 6:22:00 PM
Magnificent poetry! So well done SO
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Date: 9/7/2020 2:21:00 PM
When I read a poem by Silent One, that's poetry.
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Date: 9/5/2020 7:59:00 PM
The second last stanza has me smiling. I do my best thinking while driving and wish I could remember some of the neat ones in early morning. love phyl
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Date: 9/3/2020 8:16:00 AM
Mentality turns dark when clouds spread densely like ash smoke~ each lines defines poetry with the most pleasant words.Soothing write.I liked it.:-)Keep writing and keep inspiring us.Take care.Warmest regards from Deepa:-)
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Date: 9/2/2020 2:40:00 PM
Oh nicely done Silent One. Loved this. Not really good at most forms but I like this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/2/2020 6:11:00 AM
A most elegant, Ghazal poem, SO. So many beautifully weaved tapestry of words! A heart is healed by spoken words composed with compassion. Poets smile when they see sad lips laughing - that's poetry. As sands of sorrow pause, soul glows like a million fireflies. Nature's metaphors leave our pens dancing - that's poetry. This, my masterful poet friend, is indeed poetry. Love and much more love always.
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Date: 9/2/2020 1:48:00 AM
You have inspired me to attempt this form of poetry.
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Date: 9/1/2020 8:44:00 PM
It sure is, more so when you write it...
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Date: 8/31/2020 12:44:00 PM
Hello Silent One yes poetry are all these things. Wow! All this is true for poetry. My fav. Enjoy your day my friend. Keep well my friend.
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Date: 8/31/2020 10:08:00 AM
Hi SO, your poem is poetic perfection, perhaps I'll try if the contest is still on. I so like the effect and result it has on the reader, I enjoy repetition. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/31/2020 6:58:00 AM
an elevated work for a challenging form, S.O...glad to be part of your last contest...huggs
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Date: 8/31/2020 3:37:00 AM
An enchanting ghazal, SO:) love your definition of poetry and totally agree with it:)
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Date: 8/30/2020 3:18:00 PM
This form is enchanting with its chanting type of repitition! I heard you could hide your name with a kind of symbolic name or nicname. In your contest rules I think you stated that the stanzas did not need to be related? For me, these are very related to one another and I really like the way they stand for poetry!
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 3:26:00 PM
In regards to being related, I think you m an each couplet has to be it's own poetic piece. The theme is always the same, but couplet is different in regards to expression. Thank you
Date: 8/30/2020 8:35:00 AM
Delightful! Wonderful use of words and imagery.
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Joe...
Date: 8/30/2020 8:34:00 AM
Interesting form, thanks for the tutorial...
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Charlie..
Date: 8/30/2020 4:18:00 AM
Wow.. Awesome.. I would love to read more of your ghazals :)
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 10:59:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/29/2020 7:11:00 PM
Now, this is Poetry. What you have created here. Poetry is in motion at all times. Our thoughts circling as we linger in the day, or while we dream. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Brandy, you should write a Ghazal... I think you would do it very well...
Date: 8/29/2020 3:17:00 PM
You are such a word weaver Silent One. You beckon me to your page every time. Its nice how we share our dreams here on computer land . Thanks .
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Pixie..
Date: 8/29/2020 1:53:00 PM
Woww a ghazal, I love the form, have one I will post too. Your bees and butterflies smooch line was my favourite, so imaginative and awesome as well as the rain lashing stanza . Altogether the entire poem was superb and you revived Rumi. Kudos and am glad I got reminded to not miss out on this.
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, you should enter the contest, I have at the moment... But, please follow the rules, as I ask for a particular form..
Date: 8/29/2020 12:53:00 PM
I am reminded of the BeeGees singing, "Its only words, and words are all I have, to take your heart away!" Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Silent One
Date: 8/30/2020 3:42:00 AM
Boyzone also did a version, and I believe Elvis sang it too.. Thank you
Date: 8/29/2020 7:22:00 AM
It is that great poetry and those great poets, every single poet aspires and look up to.. The path of Poetry is of infinite wonder and you are with your giant strides honouring not only great poets but also your very great words and poetry, that's poetry! An amazing entry and a challenging one, Silent One! and an immense pleasure to read! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Silent One
Date: 8/29/2020 10:39:00 AM
Thank you, when we are poets, all are thoughts become poetry and that is what I was trying to express here..
Date: 8/29/2020 5:38:00 AM
Yes, the first example had two word matching sound that enhances the rhythm. Both are great. Well done my friend.
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Silent One
Date: 8/29/2020 10:39:00 AM
Thank you, I think I prefer this poem, but I feel the other ghazal was more difficult to write..
Date: 8/29/2020 4:25:00 AM
These are splendid examples. I particularly like the sands of sorrow Ghazal.
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Silent One
Date: 8/29/2020 10:42:00 AM
Thank you
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