That Little Brat Jack

Planted like a seed, the giant fell from the beanstalk.
He left behind his golden eggs and singing harp.
It was a faceplant…a belly flop…a real humdinger.
The trench went on for miles with no smile.
All he could think was, “That little brat, Jack…”

The giant was wobbly at the tippy top of the stalk
for the teen had tricked him, into drinking whiskey and rum,
then had him dancing, snorting, laughing with tomfoolery.

Jack dared the giant to look way down, pointing out
things that could never be seen, then woops…
wobble wobble and the giant flew through the air,
like a bird of prey with great big open eyes.

Light as a feather…never had he known the feeling.
Nor the one that followed it - a smackdown, demeaning.
Gravel and soot filled his wide open mouth, as did curses.

As he recovered, the giant imagined Jack as a fly -
he’d splat or a mosquito- he’d clap, or as a roach
that his heel would nail. “That little brat, Jack…”

Meanwhile, Jack was living large at the top
of the plushest beanstalk. He’d not see his demise
as over time the goose and harp won him over
and tricked him into making merry with them.

The golden stage, with food and drink and production -
the musical that told the demise of the giant.
Jack clapped his hands, like a toy monkey, so filled
with glee…but fiddle dee dee…he lost his balance
and had no wings to fly as he was tossed into the sky.

No worries, a giant palm caught him…that little brat.
The reunion caused bulging eyes…a heart attack.
They both perished from overexcitement…

I bet you didn’t see that coming? Flying has its hazards…

2/23/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 12:54 PM
I can't stop laughing Kim. the sis just so clever and funny. Guess they both got their comeuppance (or would that be comedownance)! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 1:51 PM
So glad you found this clever and funny! Love your ‘uppance comment! Hugs ~ Kim xx
Faulkner Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Well, what goes up must come down, very charming read, though not expecting that ending~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:48 PM
Glad I could come up with an unexpected ending :) Thanks, Michelle!
Buehler Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 9:04 PM
A completely engrossing and charming story, Kim. The ending was absolutely delightful! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Daniel Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Ha ha! Real fun, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:45 PM
So glad you thought so! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 8:03 AM
- Kin, this is a gem ... smiling and smiling throughout the poem .../// lovely weekend to you :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:45 PM
I appreciate that! Thank you!
Gentile Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 4:30 AM
OMG, Kim. this is precious!!! Loved every word! So fun to read this morning! Happy Friday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Thanks so much, Mike!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 1:19 AM
What a great sense of humour you have, Kim. No, I did not guess the ending. We were not meant to fly. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Flying down no matter what size…not good from that height
Cunningham Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 12:49 AM
An enjoyable read Kim, poor Jack. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 5:43 PM
LOL…poor Jack…poor Giant
Chuuk Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 6:40 PM
I could read this to the kids. That ending though :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:59 PM
The ending is a bit Grimm-ish eh?!
Green Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 12:44 PM
I didn't expect that ending at all. Would this be considered a Fractured Fairytale?
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:28 PM
I looked up that term…I guess you would be right! Thanks, Chris!
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