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That Little Brat Jack

Planted like a seed, the giant fell from the beanstalk. He left behind his golden eggs and singing harp. It was a faceplant…a belly flop…a real humdinger. The trench went on for miles with no smile. All he could think was, “That little brat, Jack…” The giant was wobbly at the tippy top of the stalk for the teen had tricked him, into drinking whiskey and rum, then had him dancing, snorting, laughing with tomfoolery. Jack dared the giant to look way down, pointing out things that could never be seen, then woops… wobble wobble and the giant flew through the air, like a bird of prey with great big open eyes. Light as a feather…never had he known the feeling. Nor the one that followed it - a smackdown, demeaning. Gravel and soot filled his wide open mouth, as did curses. As he recovered, the giant imagined Jack as a fly - he’d splat or a mosquito- he’d clap, or as a roach that his heel would nail. “That little brat, Jack…” Meanwhile, Jack was living large at the top of the plushest beanstalk. He’d not see his demise as over time the goose and harp won him over and tricked him into making merry with them. The golden stage, with food and drink and production - the musical that told the demise of the giant. Jack clapped his hands, like a toy monkey, so filled with glee…but fiddle dee dee…he lost his balance and had no wings to fly as he was tossed into the sky. No worries, a giant palm caught him…that little brat. The reunion caused bulging eyes…a heart attack. They both perished from overexcitement… I bet you didn’t see that coming? Flying has its hazards… 2/23/2023

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Date: 2/28/2023 12:54:00 PM
I can't stop laughing Kim. the sis just so clever and funny. Guess they both got their comeuppance (or would that be comedownance)! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 1:51:00 PM
So glad you found this clever and funny! Love your ‘uppance comment! Hugs ~ Kim xx
Date: 2/25/2023 7:30:00 PM
Well, what goes up must come down, very charming read, though not expecting that ending~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:48:00 PM
Glad I could come up with an unexpected ending :) Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 2/24/2023 9:04:00 PM
A completely engrossing and charming story, Kim. The ending was absolutely delightful! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 2/24/2023 8:15:00 PM
Ha ha! Real fun, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:45:00 PM
So glad you thought so! Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2023 8:03:00 AM
- Kin, this is a gem ... smiling and smiling throughout the poem .../// lovely weekend to you :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:45:00 PM
I appreciate that! Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2023 4:30:00 AM
OMG, Kim. this is precious!!! Loved every word! So fun to read this morning! Happy Friday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mike!
Date: 2/24/2023 1:19:00 AM
What a great sense of humour you have, Kim. No, I did not guess the ending. We were not meant to fly. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:43:00 PM
Flying down no matter what size…not good from that height
Date: 2/24/2023 12:49:00 AM
An enjoyable read Kim, poor Jack. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 5:43:00 PM
LOL…poor Jack…poor Giant
Date: 2/23/2023 6:40:00 PM
I could read this to the kids. That ending though :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 7:59:00 PM
The ending is a bit Grimm-ish eh?!
Date: 2/23/2023 12:44:00 PM
I didn't expect that ending at all. Would this be considered a Fractured Fairytale?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 1:28:00 PM
I looked up that term…I guess you would be right! Thanks, Chris!

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