Stillness Left Behind:

Sun kissed the mountains

Mist elevates to the sky

Stillness left behind

allegoryanalogymountainssunhaiku

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Darren White

May 6, 2017 at 9:05 AM

You're so talented, Budgie :)

White Wolf

May 7, 2017 at 8:17 PM

That's a lovely thing to say, Duir /|\

Lisa Ricci

May 6, 2017 at 4:58 AM

Good Evening Dear White Wolf. What a glorious moment in time and scene you give us to see. And yes, I am speaking of your words alone. Your haiku is in true form voice and tone. All is well within the entry including the imagery. Well done completely.

White Wolf

May 7, 2017 at 8:17 PM

Thank you so much, Lisa /|\

John Herlihy

May 6, 2017 at 1:57 AM

Now this is after my heart because I am always seeking stillness. Another gem. I can see you sitting there with your calligraphic pen scratching out the sound. I'll have to become a lifetime member so I can post pictures as well. The pictures enhance the poems somehow. John

White Wolf

May 7, 2017 at 8:16 PM

A good idea, John! Plus the site can do with all the support it can get, thanks for your visit today mate /|\