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~ Her love abloom fell blinded in the bliss of one thought gentle in its callow prime, and if she felt one inkling of amiss, a thwarted tempest may have been in time. As love became a storm within the boil, her naïve virtue veered into his path, those sweet delusions flailed within the toil, encumbering the fault for wielded wrath. Her timid screams, ensnared within his throes, fell silent as a veil of hush adorns. When petals wilt within the pallid rose, its beauty dies upon a stem of thorns. Bewildered tears fall from an angel’s eyes when death becomes a lover in disguise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/8/2022 10:17:00 AM
Dear Mark, it's always wonderful to return to read one of your classic beauties once again! I so enjoy the lilting elegance, exquisite rhymes, lush metaphors and the enchanting imagery of your amazing poetic gift. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/7/2022 9:10:00 PM
"Bewildered tears fall from an angel’s eyes when death becomes a lover in disguise." Love this concluding couplet. Starkly poignant and beautifully rhyming. Congratulations Mark on your win in the Marathon Contest
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Date: 10/7/2022 11:28:00 AM
A dark tragedy, beautifully written, Mark. Congratulations on your win on Mile 15 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 16 has already started. Also, check out my blog post to view your current standing in the Marathon.
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Date: 11/17/2021 8:22:00 AM
"When petals wilt within the pallid rose, its beauty dies upon a stem of thorns" - Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/4/2021 9:15:00 PM
Great rhymes, Mark. I particularly loved the final two lines. Glad to find this lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology
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Date: 10/10/2020 2:43:00 PM
Wow Mark, this reminds me of a classic write, so well done congrats on an excellent write and win!
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Date: 10/11/2020 4:45:00 AM
Thanks John
Date: 10/10/2020 12:19:00 PM
Your gifted pen spills with deep poignancy, Mark. A dark expressive piece yet beautiful in its artistic elegance.. Congratulations for your excellent win.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/11/2020 4:50:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 10/10/2020 7:10:00 AM
Mark, you have so vividly described the misery of love gone terribly wrong. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 10/11/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 10/10/2020 4:40:00 AM
So graceful and full of thought provoking mystery. I love your reflective poem. God bless you
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Date: 10/11/2020 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Regina
Date: 10/10/2020 1:33:00 AM
Interesting... Congratulations on your win. You habe penned it very well
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Date: 10/11/2020 4:58:00 AM
Thank you Pagunda
Date: 10/9/2020 11:57:00 PM
The last two lines did me in....Congrats on your win Mark.
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Date: 10/11/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thanks Carol
Date: 10/8/2020 7:40:00 AM
Mark, Interesting Sonnet with a theme on victorious and vanquished. -Richard
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/11/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/5/2020 12:48:00 PM
Exquisite poetry, Mark! You are the master of the sonnet...just beautiful! I love the metaphors here....a fave!
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/11/2020 5:14:00 AM
Thanks Laura - always nice to hear from you.
Date: 10/4/2020 4:08:00 PM
Beautifully crafted poem. A pleasure to read.
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/11/2020 5:18:00 AM
Thank you

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