Shadow Man Premiere Contest Winner

A shadow falls across
the path he’s yet to walk;
like the one that follows;
torments, bedevils, then
all the lightness swallows.

A shadow falls across
his thoughts each day he wakes;
ebbed by evening’s booze,
which blow by blow spawns an
ever darkening bruise.

A shadow falls across
the doorway where he sleeps
on cardboard featherbed;
in dreamless slumber where
there is no road ahead.

A shadow falls across
the folk that see him lie;
walk past without a thought
towards this fallen soul
whose life has come to naught.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/12/2024 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your top won in the contest..
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/29/2024 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/12/2024 4:47:00 AM
Such a sad but true tale of hopelessness Terry. Your words bring out very strong emotion. You have captured such empathy in your poem. A worthy winner. Congratulations.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/29/2024 1:13:00 AM
thank you Wen, you are always so encouraging
Date: 1/10/2024 4:11:00 PM
Far too many feel the plight of this kind of life. Congratulations on your 1st place win, Terry.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/11/2024 1:12:00 AM
Thank you Lin
Date: 1/10/2024 11:27:00 AM
This is stunning and poignant Terry. Congratulations! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/11/2024 1:12:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 1/10/2024 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations Terry! Your soulful poem "Shadow Man" has placed "First" in my contest. Your poem stood out with your superb use of imagery. Very well done my friend.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/11/2024 1:11:00 AM
Emile, thank you so much! About three years ago, I chanced upon one of your competitions, "Fragmented Verse," although I had never written a poem before, the rules intrigued me, so I entered. I placed 6th; this was my introduction to writing poetry and Poetry Soup. Along this journey, you and many other members have been supportive and encouraging. To achieve first place is immensely fulfilling; thank you so much again.
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