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Sea of Roses

O n c e upon a medieval arc, when the coral night was engrossed in fuchsia epitaphs of fireflies, your fingers, embalmed in the fangs of february moon, shredded the love ~ patchworked upon my lifeline, as gold-lilacs slowly wilted in a casket of wisteria vines ~ and Luna faded in the candlelit cracks of y o u , my beloved... If the sunset were soaked in tears and the skies rained rubies across maroon meadows of melancholic maidens ~ as they plucked peridot flowers and let the agony glide on pollen, collected in a bouquet of stars, you would've been the memory which I enveloped within rainbows and carefully laced with warmth, above my clementine constellation... Perhaps, my conscience deluded me into believing, that you were ~ the catharsis for my confusion, the cure for my clueless conscience, the blessing beautifying my bane... and the hydrangea haven for my hope... I can never be Persephone, etching emeralds upon burnt caramel branches, for, you were never my Hades ~ who promised me the clarity of crystal cuckoos, in the orchestrating omen of your unfaithful underworld. And maybe, I became one of those lost spirits, sketched between splitting symphonies of life and lifeless ~ washed with dove-graphites, a mere s h a d o w , or an illustrated hallucination in my own nightmares. So, whenever the rust flakes fall, ricocheting with snow ~ your presence will be a glass prophecy hanging with thorns in the cage of my heart, with no metaphor to manipulate this marionette ~ cushioned upon raspberry relics, for an ending, relishing the paranoia of petals ~ detached from your dreams. Dear satanic prince, could you please break this silence ~ staining our serenity stitched in scarlet ? Is your heart a bloodthirsty swan swallowing my sun in its fatal attraction, or have I inhaled a breath, rippling in the sea of roses ~ as the last feuille d'amour floats in your ocean of ardour, ceasing to chase the creases of my soul encased in you? " I shall rise as tangerine smoke ~ flowing along paper-thin streaks, where thistles are thawed in the perfume of russet rings ~ and the velveteen blanket of florets covers the chocolate chimes... synchronizing in the syllables of a destiny that was never meant to be..."

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Date: 2/21/2025 3:10:00 AM
Dear Hiya, This is absolutely beautiful how youv used mythology here too and also how youv used alliterations and metaphors and used such descriptive language to depict such deep emotion in such a soulful manner! Your words flow so well here and it feels like you’ve just let your emotions bleed on paper and the ending shows resilience and strength amidst the destined darkness that pulled two hearts apart! A very poignant and stunning poem for the prompt! Your use of the prompt here is excellent! Thank you for supporting my contest! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Sending you light always
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Date: 2/16/2025 10:20:00 PM
"I became one of those lost spirits, sketched between splitting symphonies of life and lifeless ~ washed with dove-graphites, a mere s h a d o w , or an illustrated hallucination in my own nightmares." How poignantly you have described the outcome of betrayal in love. When the trust reposed in one is let down, it leads to great frustration and despair. This may be fictional. Yet how powerfully you have expressed the heartache and feelings of bitterness on a burning experience in life. On reading this, I thought this was written for another contest- the 'Bloody Valentine'. Unfaithful love is like autumn leaves, they wither and fall, but don't be disappointed ! Please know that the fallen withered leaves pave way for new growth..... Dear Hiya, I can only say, this is simply excellent.
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Date: 2/14/2025 2:43:00 PM
Hiya, our hearts and minds surely hold onto feelings that will never go away completely. It's remarkable how you describe these feelings with exquisiteness. I just wonder how we can turn these into something good rather than having us feel hurt or loss. When I have these, I try to visualize a spot in my heart that needs swapping out. Perhaps a glass screen with these feelings in front of me can shatter and be swept into a dust bin. It's not easy to do this and takes work just getting to it.
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Date: 2/12/2025 3:21:00 PM
The breathtaking imagery of these verses was very enjoyable, Hiya. I loved, 'rained rubies across maroon meadows.' Luscious! Best of luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:34:00 AM
A flash to the past, to Medieval times. You describe the night with its fireflies, the moon and surrounding beauty. There is beauty even when the lovers separated. Love the imagery, metaphors and symbolism of your verse. Sad ending once the tangerine smoke of love evaporates. Beautiful verse.
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Date: 2/11/2025 7:38:00 AM
So much to take in I had to read it three times, you certainly have a gift for words Hiya, poetry at its finest, have a lovely day God bless you. xx
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Date: 2/11/2025 7:37:00 AM
Creative, descriptive and expressive work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. A sea of roses that would be very aromatic. Sara K
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Date: 2/11/2025 4:39:00 AM
Dear Hiya, How breathtakingly intricate, with rich metaphors and celestial sorrow. Your words bloom like petals caught in an eternal waltz—haunting, mesmerizing, and profoundly evocative. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/10/2025 6:49:00 PM
One must read this slowly, sit with and soak in the depth and inspired imagery. A compelling poem ... CayCay
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Date: 2/10/2025 8:14:00 AM
"you were never my Hades ~ who promised me the clarity of crystal cuckoos, in the orchestrating omen of your unfaithful underworld" -- Wow! Deeply introspective and wonderfully visual. "in its fatal attraction, or have I inhaled a breath, rippling in the sea of roses ~ as the last feuille d'amour floats in your ocean of ardour, ceasing to chase the creases of my soul encased in you?" -- The heart cannot be controlled...at best, we learn to compromise -- recrimination is for those who never really learned the meaning of Love. Extraordinary gifted writing.
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