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5/28/2024 for B - Type of Forms Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

"I have been a stranger in a strange land." Bible, Exodus 2:22 Strange and shy Strange and scared Scared at home Scared at school School is frightening School is scary Scary kids Scary teachers Teachers might disapprove Teachers might yell Yell at a mistake Yell at a false move Move apart Move away Away from trouble Away from fear Fear of boys Fear of girls Girls tease Girls laugh Laugh at my clothes Laugh at my red face Face the music Face the big boys Boys who fight Boys who strike Strike three Strike out Out of range Out of danger Danger here Danger there There a landmine There a snare Snare a rabbit Snare a kid Kid at 12 o'clock Kid on the playground Playground threats Playground bullies Bullies loom Bullies go away Away from people Away and alone Alone is safe Alone is lonely Lonely... Safe...

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Date: 6/25/2024 7:09:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my contest, like your poem a lot, and the chosen quote, Constance
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David Crandall
Date: 6/25/2024 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Constance! I'm enjoying trying out new forms in these contests.
Date: 6/9/2024 4:32:00 PM
Love this! We chose the same quote and the same form for this! I'm super jealous yours is so good lol! Jk. I can totally follow what you were dishing out and had a similar experience only from a Female perspective. Great writing David!xo
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David Crandall
Date: 6/9/2024 5:42:00 PM
Haha, thanks Crystol - great minds think alike! ...and sometimes I think that way too. I guess a lot of kids must have felt this way at one time or another. Well, we've each experienced our first blitz poem!
Date: 5/28/2024 7:15:00 PM
Very well written. From experience I know the feelings of which you write.
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David Crandall
Date: 5/28/2024 7:34:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Chetta - some aspects of childhood can be tough. That was definitely based on a part of my childhood experience. Luckily, I also had some more positive experiences, too.
Date: 5/28/2024 3:43:00 PM
Oh yes. I remember this form now. It's kinda cool. Sure unique!
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David Crandall
Date: 5/28/2024 3:44:00 PM
it's a little hard to stay on topic!

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