Notes About The Poem

Written for the prompt " Runner" sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Runner

When the heart feels the
weight of unvoiced verses,
as the verdant embers of Venus
follow the frozen warmth
and the permafrost flickers
of persimmon and cinnamon,
like poetry slipping through
tortured time,
I stand at the cusp of
withering wishes,
like the silver of Luna phasing
above the lamented lighthouse,
cemented with mistrust,
embedded with uncertainties,
afraid of the crashing crystals
cradling my claustrophobic psyche…

O silent scribblers,
scrolling through words of woe,
forgive my impulsive ink.
I’ve long been a runner,
fleeing familiar fickleness,
exhausted and drained
in the midst of melancholy
that lingers across forlorn pages,
like coldness amidst a summer breeze,
like darkness dwelling
in the driftwood dust
of dawning dreams and rising roses,
rinsed with regrets of musky musings.
I race through miles of solitude,
chasing nirvana,
escaping the shackles
of black-thorn springs,
where breathing seems
like a miscalculated
step to misery and interrogation...

I am a misread flame,
entwined with forgotten footfalls,
reveling in solitude,
where sonnets of love
and elegies of sorrow
no longer pierce my soul,
like rusted steel.
I drown in syllables of zen,
alone but not lonely,
silent but not silenced,
anchored in the aesthetics
of self-love and serenity,
hypothesized by
the hesitant galaxies, 
as if  I am the conceited constellation
that wanes when
storms stir my senses.
But  I refuse to pull the stars
into the hellish arms
     of vagueness,
               so this is me
saving you from 
          sweltering soliloquies 
while homing
fragments of lucidity on 
                  my own astral avenue…
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Mohammad  Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 9:03 AM
What a spectacular poem, "I am a misread flame" said so beautifully, the conclusion part got me into awe like none other, just amazing
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 6:32 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this phenomenal poem, Inky! Stunning imagery, metaphors, and vocabulary. I'm faving...
Beaufort Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 8:53 AM
IE, I had to smile at the conclusion of this poem. So this is you homing fragments of lucidity while saving us from sweltering soliloquies. I also liked the beginning where you mention items weighing on the heart and not so easily known or addressed. You seem to be on a journey to explain the happenings we see in the universe. Keep it up and run as long as you can! Smiles!!
Jama Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 3:37 AM
Reading this poem feels like moonlight weaving through the night, casting a spell of quiet beauty. “When the heart feels the weight of unvoiced verses” and “I am a misread flame, entwined with forgotten footfalls” shimmer with a tender, haunting grace. The way you intertwine blooming roses, black-thorn springs, and distant constellations creates a melody of longing. “Chasing nirvana” lingers like a whispered prayer to the stars. Your words are constellations, each one illuminating the dark.
Empress Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 5:24 AM
Sis its always so good to hear from you! Thank you so much for this beautiful and detailed comment! Im truly grateful always
George Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 8:22 PM
"I am a misread flame, entwined with forgotten footfalls, reveling in solitude, where sonnets of love and elegies of sorrow no longer pierce my soul, like rusted steel." Indeed you are a runner. At the end you bag the trophy! Forget the rest....! What you are now matters most. "I drown in syllables of zen, alone but not lonely, silent but not silenced, anchored in the aesthetics of self-love and serenity," This transformation is what is looked for in life. Your metaphors and alliterations are unmatched. I see a top winner here. All the Best dear friend.
Hind Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 2:42 PM
"as if I am the conceited constellation that wanes when storms stir my senses" beautiful lines
Alhemaidy Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Struggle is a nature of human as I think, normal human of course. Have a sweet weekend dear lovely Ink ~ AA
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 11:32 AM
- An inner struggle, is difficult to gain strength and power to bear ... to endure and adapt in our lives, Ink - The poem gives time for thought sorting ... - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 11:29 AM
A contrast of inner and outer feelings. I always admire the way you express yourself. Your introspection is so full of imagery and emotions. Always a top poet.
Poet Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Dearest Ink, wow, such an outstanding poem about the battle for self-expression and the delicate interplay between isolation, creativity, and emotional upheaval. It delves into themes of solitude, introspection, and the desire for clarity within turmoil. The story explores the impact of suppressed emotions, the struggle between desire and fear, and personal progress in uncertainty and sadness. The poem uses rich, evocative language, vivid imagery, and sensory details to create an immersive experience for the reader. Best wishes for the contest
Suri Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 10:24 AM
WOAH. The rhythm and form of this piece is INSANE... "Silent scribblers scrolling through words of woe" and the mention of Venus sent shivers down my spine! The movement and complement this piece brings is like no other! Sending love! And my exams are going well :) They're finished. I hope the same for your son!!
Gifford Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Hello IE, good luck with the contest with this beautifully, inspiring and jaw- dropping poem. Loved it. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a fantastic weekend, my friend.
Lane Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Ink, sometimes I linger in your lines trying to imagine you in such a state. At other times, I just drift along with you feeling as you stated, "alone but not lonely, silent but not silenced." Often, it's the poet that needs saving and by writing of its pain, the heart can either feel less of an ache, or it dwells in the "elegies of sorrows." A runner it must be, either to or from? That's a question that doesn't always result in the same answer being given. Excellent exposure of emotions, Ink.
Cunningham Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 8:11 AM
Striking metaphors, Edward will love this one IE, just back from travelling again. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Rhymes Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 7:38 AM
Misread flame ? Wow! This is inspiring
Empress Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Awwn thank u dahlin
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