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Written for the prompt " Runner" sponsored by Edward Ibeh

When the heart feels the weight of unvoiced verses, as the verdant embers of Venus follow the frozen warmth and the permafrost flickers of persimmon and cinnamon, like poetry slipping through tortured time, I stand at the cusp of withering wishes, like the silver of Luna phasing above the lamented lighthouse, cemented with mistrust, embedded with uncertainties, afraid of the crashing crystals cradling my claustrophobic psyche… O silent scribblers, scrolling through words of woe, forgive my impulsive ink. I’ve long been a runner, fleeing familiar fickleness, exhausted and drained in the midst of melancholy that lingers across forlorn pages, like coldness amidst a summer breeze, like darkness dwelling in the driftwood dust of dawning dreams and rising roses, rinsed with regrets of musky musings. I race through miles of solitude, chasing nirvana, escaping the shackles of black-thorn springs, where breathing seems like a miscalculated step to misery and interrogation... I am a misread flame, entwined with forgotten footfalls, reveling in solitude, where sonnets of love and elegies of sorrow no longer pierce my soul, like rusted steel. I drown in syllables of zen, alone but not lonely, silent but not silenced, anchored in the aesthetics of self-love and serenity, hypothesized by the hesitant galaxies, as if I am the conceited constellation that wanes when storms stir my senses. But I refuse to pull the stars into the hellish arms of vagueness, so this is me saving you from sweltering soliloquies while homing fragments of lucidity on my own astral avenue…

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Date: 4/27/2025 8:53:00 AM
IE, I had to smile at the conclusion of this poem. So this is you homing fragments of lucidity while saving us from sweltering soliloquies. I also liked the beginning where you mention items weighing on the heart and not so easily known or addressed. You seem to be on a journey to explain the happenings we see in the universe. Keep it up and run as long as you can! Smiles!!
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Date: 4/26/2025 3:37:00 AM
Reading this poem feels like moonlight weaving through the night, casting a spell of quiet beauty. “When the heart feels the weight of unvoiced verses” and “I am a misread flame, entwined with forgotten footfalls” shimmer with a tender, haunting grace. The way you intertwine blooming roses, black-thorn springs, and distant constellations creates a melody of longing. “Chasing nirvana” lingers like a whispered prayer to the stars. Your words are constellations, each one illuminating the dark.
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Date: 4/26/2025 5:24:00 AM
Sis its always so good to hear from you! Thank you so much for this beautiful and detailed comment! Im truly grateful always
Date: 4/25/2025 8:22:00 PM
"I am a misread flame, entwined with forgotten footfalls, reveling in solitude, where sonnets of love and elegies of sorrow no longer pierce my soul, like rusted steel." Indeed you are a runner. At the end you bag the trophy! Forget the rest....! What you are now matters most. "I drown in syllables of zen, alone but not lonely, silent but not silenced, anchored in the aesthetics of self-love and serenity," This transformation is what is looked for in life. Your metaphors and alliterations are unmatched. I see a top winner here. All the Best dear friend.
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Date: 4/25/2025 2:42:00 PM
"as if I am the conceited constellation that wanes when storms stir my senses" beautiful lines
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Date: 4/25/2025 12:31:00 PM
Struggle is a nature of human as I think, normal human of course. Have a sweet weekend dear lovely Ink ~ AA
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Date: 4/25/2025 11:32:00 AM
- An inner struggle, is difficult to gain strength and power to bear ... to endure and adapt in our lives, Ink - The poem gives time for thought sorting ... - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/25/2025 11:29:00 AM
A contrast of inner and outer feelings. I always admire the way you express yourself. Your introspection is so full of imagery and emotions. Always a top poet.
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Date: 4/25/2025 10:56:00 AM
Dearest Ink, wow, such an outstanding poem about the battle for self-expression and the delicate interplay between isolation, creativity, and emotional upheaval. It delves into themes of solitude, introspection, and the desire for clarity within turmoil. The story explores the impact of suppressed emotions, the struggle between desire and fear, and personal progress in uncertainty and sadness. The poem uses rich, evocative language, vivid imagery, and sensory details to create an immersive experience for the reader. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 4/25/2025 10:32:00 AM
Any fragments of lucidity we can maintain on our own pathway in life is a triumph in itself. The world we live in is increasingly insane. Here's to maintaining balance inky. Gorgeous writing
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Date: 4/25/2025 10:24:00 AM
WOAH. The rhythm and form of this piece is INSANE... "Silent scribblers scrolling through words of woe" and the mention of Venus sent shivers down my spine! The movement and complement this piece brings is like no other! Sending love! And my exams are going well :) They're finished. I hope the same for your son!!
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Date: 4/25/2025 9:38:00 AM
Hello IE, good luck with the contest with this beautifully, inspiring and jaw- dropping poem. Loved it. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a fantastic weekend, my friend.
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Date: 4/25/2025 8:42:00 AM
Ink, sometimes I linger in your lines trying to imagine you in such a state. At other times, I just drift along with you feeling as you stated, "alone but not lonely, silent but not silenced." Often, it's the poet that needs saving and by writing of its pain, the heart can either feel less of an ache, or it dwells in the "elegies of sorrows." A runner it must be, either to or from? That's a question that doesn't always result in the same answer being given. Excellent exposure of emotions, Ink.
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Date: 4/25/2025 8:11:00 AM
Striking metaphors, Edward will love this one IE, just back from travelling again. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 4/25/2025 8:09:00 AM
Wow! This is like 50 amazing prompts all done justice. I'm not even sure why I'm commenting now as it deserves several reads to fully appreciate! I love - "lamented lighthouse, cemented with mistrust" and "darkness dwelling in the driftwood dust" and "misread flame, entwined with forgotten footfalls" and omg "this is me saving you from sweltering soliloquies while homing fragments of lucidity on my own astral avenue"! I'm almost going to go all papi on this, if only I knew what papi means lol
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Date: 4/26/2025 6:15:00 AM
Ha, can't help but feel I could have figured out the word papi if I'd tried harder lol. I still mean every word :)
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Date: 4/26/2025 5:30:00 AM
Haha papi means daddy, dad, we call each other that, for fun! Thank you for this very kind and uplifting comment, i truly am grateful for your very soulful response, made me smile! Its an honor to receive your support
Date: 4/25/2025 7:38:00 AM
Misread flame ? Wow! This is inspiring
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Date: 4/26/2025 5:28:00 AM
Awwn thank u dahlin

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