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Refuge - Natures Heartland

refuge I spot two ducks and using my fancy I picture them in nesting mode more ducks meadow mankind’s playground humans on a picnic strangely frightened, left in a rush. litter mid-stream kids formed a dam in the years past and gone a safe place for spawning catfish shelter forest tall evergreens, fragrant pine-needle floor has become wild creatures’ heartland haven white clouds no sign of rain people no longer come what may be hiding in the woods? wonder refuge mankind’s playground in the years past and gone has become wild creatures’ heartland wonder April 6, 2023 Sponsor Constance La France Contest Name Writing Challenge - 'R' Words this is a garland cinquain

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Date: 4/8/2023 10:54:00 AM
Nice cinquain Reason. The form is great as is your use of it in the poem Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/7/2023 5:43:00 PM
I thank you, Linda, trying to get caught up with my comments - I like to acknowledge them all with a personal note.
Date: 4/7/2023 1:08:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, R.A.P. - Happy Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 4/7/2023 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine and a returned Easter blessing to you and yours. He is risen just as He said.
Date: 4/6/2023 8:39:00 PM
Reason, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Date: 4/7/2023 1:18:00 PM
Thank you Constance. Was looking at a picture of a remote place, formerly famous getaway now stayaway from place. Happy Easter-Christ arose.

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