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Red Bird

spring is coming soon our family is growing ~ a nest is needed new little ones chirp ~ red bird sees her new babies family of six Date Written: 2/16/2023 4 Place Spring Flower, Bird or Butterfly Haiku x 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/29/2023 4:29:00 PM

I love birds. My daughter wants to be an ornithologist someday. I can tell you love spring. The red bird you speak of is so pretty on a white snow branch. Your poem's imagery makes many nice Christmas cards. "A family of six" what a busy mama. Peep,peep. A pretty poem,so timely.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2023 10:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. I love Spring and the red birds. I think most people think of Christmas and the red birds. Yes, a family of 6 keeps mommy very busy. Glad it is Not me. Hahaha..... Have a blessed day writing..................

Len Gasun

Date: 3/1/2023 8:41:00 AM

Brilliant haiku my dear friend Paula.I love the fantastic image of the early arrival of spring through this lovely red bird and her new babies. Big Congrats on your win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your golden pen. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 7:15:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you love this "red bird" haiku write. Spring is coming with many new baby birds. Hugs. Have a blessed day writing..................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/26/2023 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning haiku in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 7:45:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my haiku write. Spring is coming with many baby birds. Have a blessed day writing..................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2023 12:56:00 PM

- Paula, lovely written - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this fun bird write. The babies are so cute. Hugs. Have a blessed day writing..................

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/25/2023 12:22:00 PM

Birds are a delight to watch especially in spring. Congratulations on your placement. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 7:42:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. Birds are a delight with the babies being so cute. Have a blessed day writing..................

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/25/2023 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations, Paula, for the winning achievement; your collection of haiku is lovely, and I really liked the way you depicted the many bird species.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2023 7:40:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my haiku little "red bird" write. Have a blessed day writing..................

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/25/2023 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations for your win :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2023 10:09:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. I had fun writing it. Have a blessed weekend writing..................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/25/2023 4:15:00 AM

Paula, a sweet set of haiku's, enjoyed the imagery of the bird family, congratulations on your winning placement!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2023 10:09:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it. Glad you like my "red bird" write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed weekend writing........

Michael Tor

Date: 2/17/2023 7:19:00 PM

Such a lovely site to see. We have Cardianls here they are red and beautiful. Nature is beautiful and this poem of your reflects that beauty Paula. Nicely done...xoxo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 9:10:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "red bird" write. Before we moved, we had many red birds/feeders. None here and I miss them. My old neighbor is feeding them for me. The Cardinals are red and a beautiful bird. I love them. Have a blessed weekend writing..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/16/2023 8:17:00 PM

Your sweet poem fills me with joy that spring is almost here. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad I could fill you you with joy. Spring will be here soon. Hooray!!! Have a blessed weekend writing..................

Valsa George

Date: 2/16/2023 7:42:00 PM

Love watching the little birdies in their nest huddled together ! You have brought before my eyes a lovely scene. All the Best, dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love watching my little "red birds" chirping away. Have a blessed weekend writing..................

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/16/2023 2:49:00 PM

Sweet, I can see them in the tree above, made me smile! B0l, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad this one made you smile. I love to give out smiles. They are free. Here is a smile. Catch It. Have a blessed weekend writing..................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2023 1:45:00 PM

Whoa!! A large family for them to have to rear. That pair will be working and working. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:46:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "red bird" write. Large new family chirping away. Have a blessed weekend writing...................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/16/2023 12:55:00 PM

I can see those little heads chirping in their nest…”Who’s My Mother?”

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/17/2023 1:44:00 PM

Thanks for your note. They are chirping for mother/food. Have a blessed weekend writing away...................