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This Is Why Americans Say “Fall” Instead of “Autumn" | Reader's Digest

October comes drifting with beautiful decay the garden is fading and I must say goodbye trees are removing their bright emerald gowns but, oh so lovely are their rainbow cloaks and soon the air is full of flying, floating leaves of soft yellow, gold, orange and red It is like the end of a love affair for I have such a melancholy feeling within there is a sadness and beauty in the dead leaves cool days have meant a closet reorganization put away are the Summer sundresses I love the bright colors have been replaced by somber, although still quite beautiful The animals are gathering and I am gathering I am seeking perfect October leaves to press in books before the falling rain ruins their loveliness each day nature is winding down getting ready for a complete change for awhile the trees will stand stark and naked then, magically they will be wearing snow white gowns _____________________ September 27, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/October, The Long Goodbye Copyright Protected, ID 09-1391-1523-27 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the contest, October Poetry sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 10/07/2021 First Place

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Date: 10/14/2021 6:38:00 AM
Brilliant imagery and beauty, congratulations.
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Date: 10/14/2021 8:50:00 AM
Terry, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
Date: 10/10/2021 11:09:00 PM
Brilliant beauty, Constance, congratulations:)
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Date: 10/11/2021 10:27:00 AM
Jo, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/10/2021 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful first placement Constance! You have captured Octobers beauty in this lovely poem. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/10/2021 12:45:00 PM
Connie, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 11:33:00 AM
Congrats on this wonderful poem. I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 10/8/2021 1:46:00 PM
Gina, thanks for the inspiration and contest and my wonderful placement and for the congrats and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write and picture. We will need to say, goodbye for now. It will all return next year with a smile. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 10/8/2021 9:21:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 6:41:00 AM
Such beautiful scenery and scenic narration of nature dipped and dripping with inner feelings. Great!
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:16:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the lovely compliment on my poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/8/2021 5:31:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, letting me virtually experience October as you revealed it --- since I live in an "autumnless" country. God bless you.
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:18:00 AM
Beata, thank you for the compliment, the comment and congrats, I could not image not having the seasons for each have a beauty ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/7/2021 8:05:00 PM
Back to say "Congratulations" on your top spot in Gina's contest. I felt like it was a winner (see below). Truly beautiful.
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:19:00 AM
Milt, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/7/2021 7:28:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/8/2021 8:20:00 AM
Karen, thank you so much for the congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 9/28/2021 4:27:00 PM
I wholeheatedly echo your sentiments about the month of October, which happens to be my birth month! Sad to pass on this contest as I've written enough about October, lol. Best of luck with this great poem!. Definitely a winner, IMO.
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Date: 9/29/2021 6:31:00 AM
Edward, thank you for the compliment and comment, I know what you mean I am running out of October words, I think I may be repeating myself but in a different way, if you know what I mean ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/27/2021 3:12:00 PM
Oh, Constance - such a lovely poem for my birth month.... Fortunately, October here in the West Coast is still a little bit warm and unfortunately we have those October fires. Have a good evening.
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Date: 9/28/2021 7:09:00 AM
Marilene, thank you for the compliment and comment, sorry that you are dealing with fires ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/27/2021 2:34:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Constance. Even though I dread autumn and winter, I can see how it touches your life in a really positive way. Excellent writing.
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Date: 9/27/2021 2:56:00 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, yes I do love Autumn and Winter ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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