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My Ode To Autumn

Each year the ghost of past Falls’ returns
bringing its  simple—but wondrous—treasures.
Turning the world to harmonious earthy hues.
Ardent amber, golden orange, warm browns of
walnut, spicy toffee, biscuit, bronze, russet reds.
Autumn’s brisk light dances on orchards blessing abundant harvests.
Cinnamon, pumpkin, ginger, pecan and persimmon.
September skies expectant for the change as
radiant woodlands pivot to leafy, lulled, silent shadows. 
Faded fallen, fluttering leaves, crisp crunchy, mottled pathways.  
Lost glorious largesse.

In the inevitable passing of seasons — this velvet, vibrant 
vivid — Autumn is treasured most.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 10:07 PM
I love the vibrant imagery, SuZ, and the sprinkling of alliteration throughout your poem. It is a beautiful season. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Delaney Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 4:49 PM
How nice to see you, Bill: Thanks for your always generous comments. I appreciate them so much. SuZ
Turner Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 6:17 PM
So colorful, SuZ. This one awakens the senses! Hoping you are well:)
Delaney Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:10 AM
Hi Daniel: Good to see you. You know I can’t let Autumn glide by by without some adulation. Will be over to check you poems soon. I am well and hope you are too. SuZ
Bowring Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 7:52 AM
What a glorious autumnal ode and tribute Suz. I love this! So much is highlighted in this beautifully expressed, crafted poem. Wonderful use of imagery - colours! The opening line’ Each year the ghost of past Falls returns’ is hauntingly exquisite. Love, ‘radiant woodlands pivot to leafy, lulled, silent shadows’.So poetic! Like Inky says - stunning! Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you for a lovely autumn weekend :):)
Empress Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 8:05 PM
Your ode to autumn is absolutely stunning! I am so happy to see you writing. And the way you’ve painted imagery and how youv made this flow with colors that fit the theme is so impressive and artistic of you! I especially love “ Turning the world to harmonious earthy hues.“ and also the alliterations are stunning! Seamless write really! Youv left me in awe! Love it
Delaney Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 5:00 PM
Dear Empress , Your beautiful and ever welcome comment slipped under my radar. Sorry for that because they mean a lot to me. I am hurrying to your page now. Luv, SuZ
Ray Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 4:07 AM
quite the wellspring of imagery....and for me....pumpkin pancakes is what it is all about...loved the poem
Delaney Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 3:03 AM
My favorite pancakes are carrot cake with whipped cream cheese frosting. Thanks for reading and leaving me a note. SuZ
Wolf Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:49 PM
A veritable cornucopia of imagery, Suzanne. As brilliant as the tapestry of Fall itself. Thanks, Gershon
Delaney Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:17 AM
Lovely to see you, Gershon .Thanks for your visit and wonderful comment. Best, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:31 AM
As delightful as autumn, SuZ. Such wonderful imagery stems from the heart as this is your favorite season, as I recall.
Delaney Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:08 AM
You have a good memory, Vijay….I do count it as my most favorite season. Spring is beautiful too but my soul responds to the more pensive atmosphere of fall. Best, SuZ
Leiser Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Sumptuous expressions of fall are spun with divine expertise in this lovely poem, Suzanne! Love this one! :)
Delaney Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 6:13 PM
So happy you enjoyed it Laura. and I appreciate your lovely comments. Hugs,SuZ
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Wonderful imagery and great word choice. Enjoyed your poem.
Delaney Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 3:47 AM
Thanks for your welcome visit,Karen. I appreciate your lovely comment. SuZ
One Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Your poem is full of imagery.. A vivid ode to this season...
Delaney Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 3:45 AM
So nice to read your thoughts on my poem, S.O I have been away for a while from reading and commenting because I was so sad at losing my dear little Kea.(Maltese) He was named after Muana Kea which means white mountain. Hugs. SuZ
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October 8, 2023 at 5:03 AM
- "Autumn’s brisk light dances on orchards, blessing abundant harvests" ... this line describes autumn perfectly ... your poem is filled with beautiful colors, Suzanne :) - Love it ... thanks :) - hugs
Delaney Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:20 AM
So lovely to have your visit today. My Autumn Muse has awakened. So happy you enjoyed. Hugs, SuZ
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