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Music in Me

Childhood can be a connotation of cacophonous tunes, where the sweetest sins hide pain behind a smile. We all have a story to tell, but not all are born to narrate. The poetic portray through poetry, choosing calm over chaos. others wishing if only music could ease away all the pain. Not all songs are as sincere as they sound. I should regret the stranger I welcomed in my heart, who's corrupt, lyrical, crumpled ideas made my soul tired. Each beat left me caught in the riptide of betrayal, where even the weakest waves broke me. I was enamored with being lonely, impersonating a persona of pristine perfection, whilst gazing at pensive gloaming showers, wishing that broken strings of aesthetic violins, would grant me an allaying silent goodbye. The night has a resonant silence, but words within this handwritten letter are too loud. Without background m u s i c I am no longer a prisoner of memories, silently sewing rustic rhythms into a thunderous stubborn heart. I remember storms, when rain washed the paint of fake smiles away.. I was lost in opaque puddles floating like a porcelain paper boat, struck by ruins of lightning at a time when ink refused to bleed. Abandoned in pigments of black notes, your birth changed the palette of the colors of my love. You inspired me to be like melodic flowers, blossoming together in tones of delicate redolence. Now seasonal songs serenade your name, in dawns of estival summer formed rays. I heard my iron heart beat in your melodious laughter, carving fruitful beginnings from the curves of your innocent gaze. Now my poetry and music have meaning, as you're the ink in my pen, the line on my paper. Allowing my quill to weave sincere couplets, between verses and phrases that have substance. Your initials are the warmth of my soul, inspiring me to thrive and survive. My topaz twilight, my purpose, now and hereafter. You are my most precious lullaby. For, what is a tree without branches of succulent leaves? When roots spurting water and blood merge as revitalizing sonnets. Maybe, you are my karmic answer to every prayer I’ve whispered to the moon.

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Date: 2/13/2024 9:52:00 AM
Exquisite. I have to share this with my spouse who I know will completely connect with it. Definitely a winner. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/10/2023 1:36:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A great write/ending. I loved reading this one again. Have a great day............
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Date: 11/9/2023 9:08:00 AM
- A poem that I can read over and over again... and it will touch my heart every time, Ink - "For, what is a tree without branches of succulent leaves?" - Congratulations on your win... if I could... I would have this at the top of the winners list - hugs
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Date: 11/9/2023 11:47:00 PM
Awwn this means so much to me thank you so very much dear Anne Lise , always a pleasure to hear from you
Date: 11/7/2023 6:59:00 AM
This is so powerfully written with so many beautiful poetic phrases that resonate with me. I didn't become "alive" and feel purposeful until I became a mother. Men have drained my heart, whereas my children renew it.
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:29:00 AM
You’ve really understood my poem so well dear Juliet, thank you so much, and i know exactly what you mean and i feel you, thank you for sharing also your experience. I always say this, as a mother we live and think for first for our children then us: sending you light always
Date: 11/7/2023 5:18:00 AM
this is impressive and melodious, look sometimes like a prayer, childhood is the heart of the poet, so is a son, an inspiring poem, thanks Poet
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:27:00 AM
Ah this is so kind of you, thank you so much for your supportive feedback truly grateful
Date: 11/7/2023 5:06:00 AM
your birth changed the palette of the colors of my love. You inspired me to be like melodic flowers, blossoming together in tones of delicate redolence. Now seasonal songs serenade your name-----Love exudes from mother's heart here in this poem, my friend--beautiful, beautiful sentiments, Ink. My sun, my purpose, now and hereafter--truly eternal!
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:20:00 AM
Dear Vijay you are so kind always for leaving such beautiful feedback that truly lifts me up always. Thank you for your constant support, your poetic presence is always so appreciated
Date: 11/7/2023 4:34:00 AM
Wow..my beautiful soul sis..I feel this brilliantly precious piece deep in my heart and soul..a mother’s/father’s love for her child is truly healing..a love on a whole other level..unfortunately, not all parental figures are so loving and nurturing, but to give the love to our children that we may have never received is such a gift for both the child and mother..such a precious, beautiful blessing. We learn life, and hope to pass on the best of us..protecting these little ones with our..
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:18:00 AM
Wow your comment truly left me in awe beautiful soul sis, you always are so supportive and you lift me up in any way you can , poetically and more and i cant thank you enough for that! Seriously, the way you’ve just read every line and left such deep and touching feedback that shows you understand me so very well, despite sometimes my haziness in expressing! Made my day! And now it is time for a collaboration beautiful soul sis! Thank you again! I hope you know that im so happy to have you here on soup too
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Date: 11/7/2023 4:41:00 AM
”your initials are the warmth of my soul, inspiring me to thrive and survive” — I don’t know how you weave lines like this..and the very meaning..our life, our reason for going on and living for them..I’m so in love with this breathtaking piece from you, my beautiful soul sis..something to remain in MY heart and soul..truly unforgettable
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Date: 11/7/2023 4:40:00 AM
..every being..this piece is so very poignantly beautiful..the hardships of life experienced, and a love that soars above all..”I heard my lion heart beat in your melodious laughter, carving fruitful beginnings from the curves of your innocent gaze.” —I felt this in the deepest depths within and brought tears to my eyes..”as you are the ink in my pen”—our little inspirations, the ones who inspire us everyday..learning from them—about life and love..”allowing my quill to weave sincere couplets” — always with a sincere and loving heart..
Date: 11/7/2023 3:49:00 AM
"Each beat left me caught in the riptide of betrayal, where even the weakest waves broke me." I can feel the weight of betrayal of love you had encountered in the beginning.Later What a beautiful transformation came over when an angel stepped into your lonely world with innocent laughter giving substance and meaning to your life. How beautifully you have expressed the great change that happened in you! "Now my poetry and music have meaning, as you're the ink in my pen, the line on my paper. Allowing my quill to weave sincere couplets, between verses and phrases that have substance." Once again hats off dear friend ! Into my FAVE.
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:13:00 AM
You always understand my poems so very well and leave such uplifting feedback that truly touches my heart and soul. You are every poets dream, a heartfelt and sincere reader. Thank you for taking time out of your busy day to leave a beautiful comment on my poem. Grateful
Date: 11/7/2023 12:04:00 AM
Captivating words of pure ,honest love straight from a beautiful loving heart that shines! Lovely IE!! Debx
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:11:00 AM
Awwn thank you always for being so supportive, truly grateful always! You truly are a gem
Date: 11/6/2023 10:33:00 PM
We all have a story to tell, but not all are born to narrate…: yess indeeeeed papi!!! I should regret the stranger I welcomed in my heart… mmm same!! I feel ya !! I blame not enough spf back in those days aee !!! silently sewing rustic rhythms into a thunderous stubborn heart… oooo that line!!! I heard my iron heart beat in your melodious laughter,.. awwwwn !! The way this make me move..That is pure love!!! Mmm and that ending .. this piece is pure poetry from heaven.. written in perfection..
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:10:00 AM
Awwnnthank u papi! So grateful for your kind and generous support
Date: 11/6/2023 6:55:00 PM
I am amaze at your structure of writing, so much imagery , Metaphor, and deep in feelings. Excellent write.
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Date: 11/7/2023 8:09:00 AM
This is so kind of you, always im touched by your support and encouraging feedback, thank you so very much truly
Date: 11/6/2023 6:33:00 PM
Your karmic miracle I'm sure, you are a gift to me, you and your amazing poetry
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:56:00 AM
Awwn thank you sweet rose i am truly grateful! For your and your poetic presence and to Be able to read such brilliant work like yours.
Date: 11/6/2023 4:48:00 PM
I have no words, dear poet, only the heartfelt emotion of understanding when a world of dim-lit realms of shade can find the light of life in the heart of innocence where love is shared unconditionally
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:47:00 AM
Thank you dear Frederick always for understanding and for sharing your very kind thoughts on my poems, im truly grateful for your poetic support
Date: 11/6/2023 3:20:00 PM
a magnificent and eloquent poem, dearest Ink. Your words flowed beautifully and your images depicted such anguish in a love betrayed at the very soul level. Yet, love found you again in the form of a child who brought laughter, joy, and purpose back to your soul, flowing through the ink you use to create poetry. Just lovely beyond words! The last verse was enchanting and left me speechless. Your talent continues to wow me! Grateful for your heart, your soul, and your words. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:41:00 AM
Awwn this comment truly made my soul warm And smile! Your kindness touches so many hearts, and lifts them up, i hope you know that, you are truly such a beautiful soul that im grateful to know, poetically and more! Thank you so very much for always being so supportive
Date: 11/6/2023 2:46:00 PM
This brought tears, it was so, so beautiful. You have written your heart out- it's plain to see. What a frank and gifted poem, Ink.
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:23:00 AM
Awwn thank you sweet soul, i really appreciate you feeling my words, always grateful
Date: 11/6/2023 2:17:00 PM
Dear Ink, your exceptional talent is brilliantly showcased in this exquisite poem. Your profound understanding and eloquent expression are truly admirable. The weight of betrayal resonates deeply in the initial section, evoking a palpable emotional response. The second part of your work captivated me to no end, as your boundless creativity and inspiration effortlessly captivate and engross any reader fortunate enough to come across this remarkable piece. The profound impact of another individual on your being is portrayed in a truly enchanting manner. Your employment of distinct imagery and meticulously chosen language adds an extra layer of splendor to your already beautiful composition.
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:07:00 AM
Wow this comment means alot to me dear sotto! Thank you so very much truly for not just reading but also for feeling my emotions. Gratedul always!
Date: 11/6/2023 1:59:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write/great ending. Love It... Have a great/blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much always for being so supportive
Date: 11/6/2023 1:21:00 PM
This one just got better and better to me. I reaaly like the second half where you can see how the writer is affected by another person in such a beautiful way. I have no idea how you come up with all your unique imagery!
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:05:00 AM
Thank you so much truly for your kind and uplifting comments, i always appreciate your feedback. Grateful for your poetic presence

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