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Moon And Sea Collaborating

Each pulls the tide in two sockets Where moon and sea hang like lockets One friction between two wading bodies — The pale head of moon, on cue with sea The gentler anesthetic of the glass ~Within her encumbered salty past ~ Their flashing eyes in both windswept Water is who they reflect A wavelength's shoulder muscling by — The catch of forever swimming light It feels every night — The morning tears upon us soon, Eyes on the sea, it's been moved.

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Alesia Leach

Date: 5/23/2025 4:54:00 PM

This is stunning--fluid, romantic, and aching with eternal motion. "The catch of forever swimming light" feels like pure poetry distilled. The moon and sea as lovers, reflections, and opposites--gorgeous tension. I felt the pull in every line.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2025 11:56:00 PM

Moon and sea. Mystical and lovely.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/15/2025 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD Paige! It is a delightful poem! :) <3

Paige Hind

Date: 5/14/2025 9:09:00 AM

Thank you ALL for your kind congratulations! I am going to comment back as I have time. <3 Hugsss

Daisy Meadows

Date: 5/14/2025 12:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD.Well done.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/13/2025 9:53:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, Paige. I enjoyed this poem very much.

Me Me

Date: 5/13/2025 6:39:00 PM

Very nice work, I would like to challenge you to a write sometime, your poetry is definitely noticeable!!!

Paige Hind
Date: 5/14/2025 9:16:00 AM

Honey, I only write when I am inspired to write. Subjects just come to me. I never know when I'm going to have time to come online PS...I've thought of writing with people in the past, but I'd rather write for them rather than with them. That's just me. So sweet of you to ask though- please don't take offence. Hugs and kisses, lovely you <3

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/13/2025 6:13:00 PM

The light of the moon moves with the sea. (This image is delicate, yet, soft and sensual). Simply breathtaking, Paige. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Me Me
Date: 5/13/2025 6:46:00 PM

Indeed!!

Tom Woody

Date: 5/13/2025 3:39:00 PM

Hey Paige hope you enjoyed your day in the sun

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/13/2025 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away............

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 5/13/2025 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Thanks for sharing!!!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/13/2025 11:45:00 AM

So lovely, Paige, with wonderful creative use of fresh images and inventive word usage! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings of joy to you!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/13/2025 9:24:00 AM

I loved riding the beautiful tide, Paige! Congratulations on POTD.

Me Me
Date: 5/13/2025 6:47:00 PM

Hmmmm!

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/13/2025 9:08:00 AM

Back with Congratulations my dearest Paige! Masterpiece, a mariner's dream ~ xhugs

Ink Empress

Date: 5/13/2025 8:35:00 AM

Back with congrats on getting featured! Well deserved POTD! Sending you light always dear paige!

Me Me
Date: 5/13/2025 6:47:00 PM

Yessss!!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/13/2025 6:22:00 AM

Wow! A powerhouse of a poem! Congrats on POTD!

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/13/2025 5:44:00 AM

Hello Paige, congratulations on your POTD win with this beautifully written piece. Have a wonderful day as you celebrate.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/13/2025 4:50:00 AM

The moon and the sea have always had a special relationship. Usually, I write about the one shared by the moon and the sun. But your lines have them in synergetic compromise. Thank goodness it is so. Congratulations on POTD, Paige.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/13/2025 4:34:00 AM

Paige, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/13/2025 4:34:00 AM

Dearest Paige, I am back to high five you on such a great art work and getting POTD. YEAH!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/13/2025 1:25:00 AM

Lovely poetry Paige, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2025 1:10:00 AM

- A beautiful sight ...congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Paige :) - hugs

Me Me
Date: 5/13/2025 6:48:00 PM

Breathtaking!!!

Karen Jones

Date: 5/13/2025 12:53:00 AM

Nice imagery Paige! Congratulations on your success as potd!

Me Me
Date: 5/13/2025 6:49:00 PM

Very articulate ????

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/12/2025 8:04:00 PM

Ah, Paige I can see the swimming light, love your metaphors they are gentle ...the sea "~Within her encumbered salty past" wow ~ xhugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/12/2025 7:08:00 AM

Dearest Paige, I adore how your tide-pulled wonder-moon and sea entwined, reflects and moves the other in quiet, luminous tension. I feel the gentle ache of longing and the shimmer of connection in every line, like a locket holding night’s secrets. A wonderful collaboration of light and depth and your words are a current I want to drift in, again and again. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel