Late October

fallen leaves
           whose veins etch the ground
           in shapes
           silent 
           stirred only by the wind
           the gentle nudge of autumn

cool air slides into my soul
a blessed ghost
that dances me like candy in a child's bag

costume urgency of late October
when tradition is the healing floss of fall
as Halloween branches into mini goblins
                         and witches with bright eyes
                         a wispy wish for sweets folded into masks
                         playing tricks of disguise

child creatures trek to lighted houses 
                                        that rock 'n roll with treats
no lost sense of direction in springy strides
a jauntiness capped by glee

for childhood in mind uncages sun
                                                 warming in nomadic time
                                       to scrub away the paint of age
                                          




Written October 14, 2022
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Kauffman Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:29 AM
"Fallen leaves whose veins etch the ground" just one of your amazing lines Brian. So many wonderful lines about a child's joy of Halloween. So many creative images and deeply poetic lines. Congratulations on your first place win. Happy Christmas season and a toast to the new year!
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December 28, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Greetings Sam. Best wishes for a fine New Year to you + your family. My appreciation, too, for your positive take on my October poem - a month of inspiring color. Sincerest regards, Brian
Ligon Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 9:57 PM
This brings back the nostalgic joy of dressing up for free candy. Very well written.
Sambourne Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 6:17 AM
You are most thoughtful to drop by + leave a positive comment. Thank you. Sincerely, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 2:21 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 5:35 AM
Thank you Sara. Your congratulatory note is much welcomed. Sincerest regards, Brian
Radice Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 7:03 AM
A very worthy winner Brian. Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Greetings Gary. Happy Holidays to you + your family. One never knows how submissions to contests are evaluated. Your support + comments are much appreciated, however. Be well. Brian
Wells Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 11:47 PM
Yet another beautiful poem of autumn that takes many of us back to our childhood excitement about wearing a costume and trick or treating. It makes us old fogeys feel young again. Nicely done, Brian!
Sambourne Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Your kind appraisal of my work is a great way to begin any day. Enjoy the autumn, Thomas, with its color + bounty. All the best, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Ahhh!! To go back to childhood. I see your point and the nostalgia associated with the idea, but in reality I don't desire to do that. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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October 27, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Hi Sara, thank you for your read of my posting. The poem is more about maintaining childhood joy in adulthood rather than clinging to a past through nostalgia. However, when memory seizes a childhood gone, nostalgia usually co-habits. Be well. Brian
Messina Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 6:19 AM
This is wonderfully written, Brian. Brings back memories :) Great entry for Mark's contest. Best wishes my friend. Have a nice Sunday...Charlie
Sambourne Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:36 AM
Thank you, Charles for your positive remarks on my submission. I hope all is well with you + your family. Enjoy the fall. Cheers, Brian
Fowler Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 3:16 PM
"...tricks of disguise" and "...childhood in mind is light" It amazes me how you so succinctly sum up the nostalgia of youth remembered. Just lovely! :)
Sambourne Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 9:59 PM
Your words encourage my pen, Linda. Thank you for the affirmative remarks. Sincere good wishes, Brian
Tor Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 3:21 AM
Such a poem to reflect memories of Autumn and Halloween Brian. Best wishes in the contest.
Sambourne Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Thank you Michael, for your visit to my poem + your supportive message. Best wishes, Brian
Radice Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 2:25 AM
The warm glow of nostalgia shines bright in your descriptive and atmospheric words Brian. A lovely read and I really like the last 3 lines that you have settled on. Cheers - Gary
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October 17, 2022 at 6:25 AM
Greetings Gary, I hope all is well with you. My appreciation for your stop by + affirmative comments. Yes, the final lines were a struggle. Sometimes words + sentiments trip us up like cracks in sidewalks. Sincerest regards, Brian
Deo Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 12:11 PM
a very poetic way to say: enjoy the Halloween joys of your youth - still. A blessed and pretty month plus Nature's Provision is evident in all colors and shapes. Shalom, shalom my Brother in Christ
Sambourne Avatar
October 16, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Hello Anil, Halloween joy + feverish anticipation are to be cherished indeed, as we age. You are spot on. Sometimes memory is a warming cave. Thank you for your visit + affirmative comments. Sincerely, Brian
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October 15, 2022 at 3:20 PM
You capture the breath of Autumn from a child's perspective. I see myself gathering leaves for my scrapbook with delight, and just waiting for Trick or Treating come Halloween night. Memories, take care.
Sambourne Avatar
October 15, 2022 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Dennis, for your stop by + for your affirmative comments on my poem that does move to childhood memory. I too remember pressing fall leaves into books. Be well. Brian
Hankins Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:08 AM
A fine poem, Brian. Good luck in the Marathon!
Sambourne Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Thanks very much Milton. I've tinkered with the last 3 lines a few times. Revision doesn't seem to bring contentment. I appreciate your kind response, nevertheless. Be well. Brian
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