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Late October

fallen leaves whose veins etch the ground in shapes silent stirred only by the wind the gentle nudge of autumn cool air slides into my soul a blessed ghost that dances me like candy in a child's bag costume urgency of late October when tradition is the healing floss of fall as Halloween branches into mini goblins and witches with bright eyes a wispy wish for sweets folded into masks playing tricks of disguise child creatures trek to lighted houses that rock 'n roll with treats no lost sense of direction in springy strides a jauntiness capped by glee for childhood in mind uncages sun warming in nomadic time to scrub away the paint of age Written October 14, 2022

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Date: 12/28/2022 9:29:00 AM
"Fallen leaves whose veins etch the ground" just one of your amazing lines Brian. So many wonderful lines about a child's joy of Halloween. So many creative images and deeply poetic lines. Congratulations on your first place win. Happy Christmas season and a toast to the new year!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/28/2022 9:33:00 AM
Greetings Sam. Best wishes for a fine New Year to you + your family. My appreciation, too, for your positive take on my October poem - a month of inspiring color. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 12/24/2022 9:57:00 PM
This brings back the nostalgic joy of dressing up for free candy. Very well written.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/25/2022 6:17:00 AM
You are most thoughtful to drop by + leave a positive comment. Thank you. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 12/21/2022 2:21:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/21/2022 5:35:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Your congratulatory note is much welcomed. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 12/19/2022 7:03:00 AM
A very worthy winner Brian. Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/19/2022 8:03:00 AM
Greetings Gary. Happy Holidays to you + your family. One never knows how submissions to contests are evaluated. Your support + comments are much appreciated, however. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/30/2022 11:47:00 PM
Yet another beautiful poem of autumn that takes many of us back to our childhood excitement about wearing a costume and trick or treating. It makes us old fogeys feel young again. Nicely done, Brian!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/31/2022 8:24:00 AM
Your kind appraisal of my work is a great way to begin any day. Enjoy the autumn, Thomas, with its color + bounty. All the best, Brian
Date: 10/27/2022 7:22:00 AM
Ahhh!! To go back to childhood. I see your point and the nostalgia associated with the idea, but in reality I don't desire to do that. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/27/2022 7:48:00 AM
Hi Sara, thank you for your read of my posting. The poem is more about maintaining childhood joy in adulthood rather than clinging to a past through nostalgia. However, when memory seizes a childhood gone, nostalgia usually co-habits. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/23/2022 6:19:00 AM
This is wonderfully written, Brian. Brings back memories :) Great entry for Mark's contest. Best wishes my friend. Have a nice Sunday...Charlie
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/23/2022 10:36:00 AM
Thank you, Charles for your positive remarks on my submission. I hope all is well with you + your family. Enjoy the fall. Cheers, Brian
Date: 10/20/2022 3:16:00 PM
"...tricks of disguise" and "...childhood in mind is light" It amazes me how you so succinctly sum up the nostalgia of youth remembered. Just lovely! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/20/2022 9:59:00 PM
Your words encourage my pen, Linda. Thank you for the affirmative remarks. Sincere good wishes, Brian
Date: 10/19/2022 3:21:00 AM
Such a poem to reflect memories of Autumn and Halloween Brian. Best wishes in the contest.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/19/2022 6:17:00 AM
Thank you Michael, for your visit to my poem + your supportive message. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 10/17/2022 2:25:00 AM
The warm glow of nostalgia shines bright in your descriptive and atmospheric words Brian. A lovely read and I really like the last 3 lines that you have settled on. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/17/2022 6:25:00 AM
Greetings Gary, I hope all is well with you. My appreciation for your stop by + affirmative comments. Yes, the final lines were a struggle. Sometimes words + sentiments trip us up like cracks in sidewalks. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 10/16/2022 12:11:00 PM
a very poetic way to say: enjoy the Halloween joys of your youth - still. A blessed and pretty month plus Nature's Provision is evident in all colors and shapes. Shalom, shalom my Brother in Christ
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/16/2022 3:55:00 PM
Hello Anil, Halloween joy + feverish anticipation are to be cherished indeed, as we age. You are spot on. Sometimes memory is a warming cave. Thank you for your visit + affirmative comments. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 10/15/2022 3:20:00 PM
You capture the breath of Autumn from a child's perspective. I see myself gathering leaves for my scrapbook with delight, and just waiting for Trick or Treating come Halloween night. Memories, take care.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/15/2022 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Dennis, for your stop by + for your affirmative comments on my poem that does move to childhood memory. I too remember pressing fall leaves into books. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/14/2022 9:08:00 AM
A fine poem, Brian. Good luck in the Marathon!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/14/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thanks very much Milton. I've tinkered with the last 3 lines a few times. Revision doesn't seem to bring contentment. I appreciate your kind response, nevertheless. Be well. Brian

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