Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse

War is just a means tae a’ end
Deaythe’s the price o’ life.
Famine comes upon black horse 
fillin the gullet o’ Deaythe’s strife.

War is just a means tae a’ end
Deaythe’s the price o’ life
Power swings War’s blood red swuird
the weak an’ the old suffice.

War is just a means tae a’ end
Deaythe’s the price o’ life.
Conquest raises mighty bow
crownin’ Kings with rare delight.

War is just a means tae a’ end
Deaythe’s just the price o’ life
on pale horse the banshee rides
binna matter what your fief.

In deayth we fertilize the field
Life is aw an’ Deaythe's real.

*In the style of Robert Burns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 7:22 PM
Excellent work, Deborah! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Peace and love, Audrey
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November 24, 2009 at 3:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Deborah...Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian Strand's contest, Adaption. This is a lovely adaption of Robert Burns. May you have many more to come. Enjoy this honor and keep on writing beautiful poems. Love and hugs, Andrew.
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November 17, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations, Deb, on your winning poem in Brian's contest... well deserved win for a tremendous poem... luv Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 8:39 PM
Congratulations Deborah. you did well indeed. Love, Joyce
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November 11, 2009 at 8:45 PM
Dear Light and Love, Deborah, Congratulations On YOUR Well deserved 3rd Place Win in Brian's Contest I see You are a True Robert Burns Groupie Excellent Burn style writting a Superb POEM YOUR Liege...HG
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November 11, 2009 at 8:06 PM
Congratulation, Deborah, on your winning poem and placement in Brian's contest.. well earned and well deserved... wonderful write.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 11, 2009 at 6:06 PM
Deb, I knew this was a winner. Congratulations! Love, Lainieb
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November 11, 2009 at 5:28 PM
Clever write, Deborah! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Hugs, Donna
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November 11, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Excellent adaptation of a more difficult poem than most of us chose to attempt in our efforts! Congrats, Deborah!! ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 8:34 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest MY DEAR is now open
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November 8, 2009 at 4:50 AM
Excellent write, Deborah. And an excellent entry into Brian's contest. Lovingly. Dane Ann
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November 7, 2009 at 5:36 PM
Great poem Deborah, good luck in the contest. Pam
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November 6, 2009 at 3:14 PM
This is a winner sweetie..it is..excellent my friend-- Charma
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 10:25 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today . Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Wishing You The Best In The Contest. (HUGS) Love, Carol
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November 6, 2009 at 5:52 AM
AWESOME! A WINNER FOR SURE. LOVE, LAINIE
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November 6, 2009 at 4:34 AM
This is very good. You certainly have a feel for the Scottish dialect, Deborah. Love, Carolyn
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November 5, 2009 at 11:10 PM
well done Deborah! thanks for the visit and kind invitation... but I'd have to google up what a concrete number is lol!
Terrell Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 4:52 PM
The style of words you use is amazing. Strange Anthony though of one about the horsemen... ( hello to Anthony too...I just wrote one of VoiceNet.com about the Cherokee and the crying banchee in the wind....maybe a little strange hugh........
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November 5, 2009 at 4:30 PM
at least you acknoledge that there is a horseman. god bless
Nutter Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 10:15 AM
I find it amazing that I was considering writing about the four horsemen the other day. I was reading about the horsemen in Revelations. Good luck in the contest and thanks for a wonderful read. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Mason Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 9:23 AM
I too have enjoyed reading Burns in past days and you've captured the Gaelic (?) beautifully. Wanted to thank you for your suggestion of kereoke ... smile ... I'm headed up to my son's for a week on the 24th and the grandkids have a little band set up so we'll have fun with that ... I'm really not all that "down" as my mood shifts blow like the wind ... smile ... thanks for your support, Deborah !!
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November 5, 2009 at 7:55 AM
Thank you for supporting my contests Debbie.Rgds Brian (sooupmail re yr questions)
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