Footle..Apples

Apples Adam Had'm

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Date: 11/16/2009 4:39:00 PM

Got a good chuckle out of this one!! What a day brightener. So much truth in your words...and it changed the world. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/12/2009 2:06:00 PM

Recieve.... from Eve! Tell Sean we must...have crust! Love, QR

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/11/2009 6:27:00 AM

Ha ha!! Love this one! Clever girl. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 2/11/2009 5:11:00 AM

Yes! The apple and, well........? You are so clever. I lika dis very mucho. Love, daver

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/11/2009 2:41:00 AM

one bite, dead light. lol Kristin

Arany P.

Date: 2/11/2009 1:18:00 AM

yes.. indeed!! thank you for your lovely comments!! ~ Arany

Brian Strand

Date: 2/10/2009 11:54:00 PM

Nice one BG.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/10/2009 10:40:00 PM

Serpent ..... Repent .... !! Enough for footle pie , Barbara ?? ...

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/10/2009 8:09:00 PM

Footles are the comic relief of poetry. You really can't read one without smiling. Nice job Barbara. Laurie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/10/2009 6:37:00 PM

Very nice one my friend..Loved it.

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/10/2009 6:16:00 PM

Nice work BG, I hope you are doing well. These footles are coming along from everyone...Raul