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Fisherman (Co-Written With Doris Culverhouse)

Swimming, life carefree Net tightens around the school Deliverance, grace May your hook always be cast Where you least expect fish caught Synergism, save These lost fish, grateful intent Catch and release, Life Responsible now Freedom, new life in warm water Breach, spout words, joy, sing School of life, protective school Numbers rise with the right bait Bait, love, nuturance Guide... North Star...The leader Home Reward eternal life

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/28/2010 6:41:00 PM

May we PLEASE have the pleasure of another co-write from the mother and daughter team?... Think I'll go fishin' next weekend! (Probably won't even get a nibble, but who cares?) - Tim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/20/2010 10:36:00 AM

You make us long for fishing season, Sara and Doris! Indeed, "catch and release" is the way to go if you're not going to eat your catch. You remind me of dreams in which I'm a fish trying to guide the others away from the hooks and nets. We take conservation of our marine resources very seriously here in Florida and I like the way you compare the fish's struggles to those encountered by humans. Well done, Dynamic Duo! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2010 6:48:00 AM

Nice piece from a lovely due, well done Doris & Sara >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 4:35:00 AM

Perfection! This is a great Mother-Daughter write, you two. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/19/2010 3:04:00 PM

great ending mom!! thanks for the collaboration!!

John Freeman

Date: 2/19/2010 12:17:00 PM

Awesom cooperative write Sara, and Doris. You two make an inspiring couple. Keep up the good work. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/19/2010 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on the exceptional Co-Write Sara and Doris. I enjoyed it very much. Please give us more. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/19/2010 9:18:00 AM

Good cooperative write, Sara! You both are a good team. Hope I'm feeling better tomorrow as I had a long session at the dentist's today. Took some pain killer, but did not help very much. Tomorrow will be a cat exhibit here which I will visit. Wishing you a nice weekend and thank you for your comments...Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/19/2010 7:34:00 AM

good haiku,

Susan Palli

Date: 2/19/2010 3:22:00 AM

loved it!

Brian Strand

Date: 2/19/2010 1:27:00 AM

Positive poetry Sara and Doris.Thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2010 8:04:00 PM

A great combined effort with stunning results.. I read the entire poem on Doris's list.. u two make a dynamic duo...luv.. Linda-Marie.. I have company the next four days so will be on and off site whenever I can between entertaining and visiting.. luv..

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/18/2010 6:19:00 PM

Wise words. well done......Margaret

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/18/2010 5:25:00 PM

I wrote the next haiku, check it out. hope you are feeling good.

Mike Butler

Date: 2/18/2010 3:48:00 PM

Very enjoyable Rengay. Nicely written! -Mike

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/18/2010 3:22:00 PM

mother daughter? i knew it wouldn't be long. john