Film Noir

The melody is haunting me
Black and white, an old TV

A darkened room, the smoke perfume
insults the sense of right and wrong
Elbows rest upon a bar

Heads are bent, to hide the scars
and troubled souls have found a throne
Some will find a well known home
in a shot-glass of a song

A clarinet has cried the blues
A secret lies with deep regret
Who cares that no one gives a rip?

It's just enough to face the night
Another place to roll the dice
And once again, when tears have dried
they'll leave this place
without a face
to walk away without a trace
leaving me to wonder who
has left me in this darkened room
alone





Written while listening to Billie Holiday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/5/2009 11:06:00 PM
Wow, Carrie...I think this one is extraordinarily insightful. I was at this bar this past week. Very well done! DG
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Date: 1/5/2009 4:34:00 AM
Carrie I am so loving this piece from you. I know what those tunes can produce. You have written this well and the mood and setting is captured well. Great job!
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Date: 1/4/2009 10:50:00 AM
Awesome Carrie! This is so vivid I feel like I'm at a club. There is something beautiful about singing the blues, even if they are sad songs. I guess most of us can relate to them. Your writes are always a pleasure to read. You paint such wonderful pictures. Thank you for sharing and support! Love Robin
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Date: 1/4/2009 3:43:00 AM
Excellent Carrie, I feel like I should be a bit (alot) buzzed and thinking of days gone by - well done!!! Love, Kristin LOVE the good ole blues...
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Date: 1/3/2009 12:50:00 PM
Yes the blues can touch the hardest heart. Great job with this topic. Thank you for reading and commenting on my latest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/3/2009 12:18:00 PM
Oh how I love the blues. Your imagery here is amazing and no doubt so real to life. Feel like I am there in that smoke filled bar, now all I need to do is play some music. Excellent write/tribute Carrie to a wonderful form of music. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/3/2009 10:53:00 AM
great poem. love the imagery in this one. - love & peace- james
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