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Festering Wound

On the banks of river folks gathered solemnly Where in repose lay the body of his father; Dry dead-wood was stacked in layers they built, Fire was crackling, burning, heads were bowing, Memorializing deeds in voices of the elders-- That is how cremation was done in his village. He recalls now how they walked river’s edge Where wildflowers bloomed, animals grazed As farmers tilled rice fields in dawn’s silence, Much as his father did until he died that day. Frozen he stood there, thousand burns unseen, Inflamed in veins as he looked to his mother Gasping for words choking youthful innocence As tearfully they hugged fearful of the burden Bewildering his mother into stilled unknown. Look at him, for a glimpse of child-subjugated Who parted in hopes of altering course of fate, Grateful to those who made room for his stay, In a city where wealth was sign of intelligence, Poverty denigrated~ tantamount to ignorance, And class defined by the ancestry of bigoted; There he found shelter, offered only as a loan, Love not included in covenant of sustenance, And mighty price required to learn existence: Humiliated endurance, humbled-subservience… That even in freedom-won, never sets one free, Suffocating still in those embers carbon-fumed, Life robbed of childhood throttling pitied tears, Adulthood festering wounds of acrid memories Spurned by summers and dejected by autumns, Parching his life’s springs, stunting his seasons, Caging his heart where his father’s ashes burn. March 14, 2022 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1096 Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 29 – Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: Festering Wound

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Date: 3/31/2022 1:03:00 PM
Sad. Congrats on this one being on Edward's winners' page. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 3/27/2022 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations, again. One more verse touched me while reading it again was: "Love not included in covenant of sustenance".
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Date: 3/27/2022 11:28:00 AM
Back with appreciation to this inspirational poem, you really excelled as expected in this writing, Vijay.Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Lassad.
Date: 3/27/2022 10:20:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this outstanding poem, Vijay:-) You're such a gifted poet!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:42:00 PM
So special to hear that from you Edward. Many thanks for sponsoring contest with clever and interesting themes.
Date: 3/27/2022 6:51:00 AM
Such is the harsh life of an orphan, dear Vijay, so heart wrenchingly portrayed in your inimitable poetic brilliance
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/27/2022 9:39:00 AM
That is a high compliment coming from you, US. Much appreciate your visit and feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 3/27/2022 5:46:00 AM
They prick and pain and make life miserable. Psychological wounds do much more than the physical ones. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/27/2022 9:37:00 AM
So true and well said, Christuraj. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 3/26/2022 4:26:00 PM
Memories, good or bad, are with us as long as our soul needs them, or we can learn from them. A passionate story of woe, told through the eloquent imagery of the words so well chosen for this poetry. Should do well in the contest, Vijay. Write On! my friend, Bill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/27/2022 9:37:00 AM
Glad you stopped by Bill with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 3/16/2022 12:09:00 PM
You entwine emotions and imagery to form another striking poem, Vijay. Some memories are meant to keep us company throughout our life. ~ Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 12:56:00 PM
So nice to hear that from you Paul. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 3/15/2022 6:04:00 PM
"Acrid memories caging his heart" Not a good feeling to have at all. Your words hold so many moments and emotions, each one touching my heart so deeply. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 7:36:00 AM
Quite emotional for sure, my friend. Thank you for reading this long poem. Much appreciate your thoughts, Brandy. Many thanks.
Date: 3/15/2022 12:56:00 AM
How you have exposed the festering wounds within a young heart who has managed to move away from the place of hard work and meager living to the heart of a city where memories of robbed childhood, discrimination and prejudices follow him like a faithful mongrel ! "Parching his life’s springs, stunting his seasons, Caging his heart where his father’s ashes burn". These culminating lines are indeed soul stirring. Vijay, all the best in the contest !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2022 5:32:00 AM
Always a treat to read your insightful thoughts, Valsa. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2022 5:03:00 PM
It's always a pleasure to see your work, Vijay, and this one is no exception. Compassionate lyrics encapsulate your deepest feelings! Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2022 5:31:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 3/14/2022 1:52:00 PM
You have such a wonderful way with words Vijay.. this one is full of great verses and as always full of imagery..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2022 5:31:00 AM
Thank you SO. Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate.
Date: 3/14/2022 12:01:00 PM
Strong emotions, expressed in tender verses, my friend, Vijay! Congratulations. Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2022 5:30:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 3/14/2022 11:27:00 AM
A powerful verse filled with raw emotions. Sterling poetry Vijay. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2022 5:30:00 AM
So glad to hear that, Tom. Much appreciate your comments as always. Many thanks.
Date: 3/14/2022 11:05:00 AM
This is excellent Great writing and powerful lead up to a masterful ending Vijay. Perfect for the contest title chosen too :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2022 5:29:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem Heidi. It feels real, because it is. Much appreciate your supportive comments my friend. Many thanks.

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