Festering Wound

On the banks of river folks gathered solemnly
Where in repose lay the body of his father;
Dry dead-wood was stacked in layers they built,
Fire was crackling, burning, heads were bowing,
Memorializing deeds in voices of the elders--
That is how cremation was done in his village.

He recalls now how they walked river’s edge
Where wildflowers bloomed, animals grazed
As farmers tilled rice fields in dawn’s silence,
Much as his father did until he died that day.

Frozen he stood there, thousand burns unseen,
Inflamed in veins as he looked to his mother
Gasping for words choking youthful innocence 
As tearfully they hugged fearful of the burden
Bewildering his mother into stilled unknown.

Look at him, for a glimpse of child-subjugated
Who parted in hopes of altering course of fate,
Grateful to those who made room for his stay,

In a city where wealth was sign of intelligence,
Poverty denigrated~ tantamount to ignorance,
And class defined by the ancestry of bigoted;

There he found shelter, offered only as a loan,
Love not included in covenant of sustenance,
And mighty price required to learn existence:
Humiliated endurance, humbled-subservience…

That even in freedom-won, never sets one free,
Suffocating still in those embers carbon-fumed,
Life robbed of childhood throttling pitied tears,

Adulthood festering wounds of acrid memories
Spurned by summers and dejected by autumns,
Parching his life’s springs, stunting his seasons,
Caging his heart where his father’s ashes burn.

March 14, 2022
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1096
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 29 – Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: Festering Wound
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Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Sad. Congrats on this one being on Edward's winners' page. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations, again. One more verse touched me while reading it again was: "Love not included in covenant of sustenance".
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Poet Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:28 AM
Back with appreciation to this inspirational poem, you really excelled as expected in this writing, Vijay.Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Lassad.
Ibeh Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this outstanding poem, Vijay:-) You're such a gifted poet!
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:42 PM
So special to hear that from you Edward. Many thanks for sponsoring contest with clever and interesting themes.
Seeker Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 6:51 AM
Such is the harsh life of an orphan, dear Vijay, so heart wrenchingly portrayed in your inimitable poetic brilliance
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:39 AM
That is a high compliment coming from you, US. Much appreciate your visit and feedback. Many thanks.
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:46 AM
They prick and pain and make life miserable. Psychological wounds do much more than the physical ones. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:37 AM
So true and well said, Christuraj. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Baker Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 4:26 PM
Memories, good or bad, are with us as long as our soul needs them, or we can learn from them. A passionate story of woe, told through the eloquent imagery of the words so well chosen for this poetry. Should do well in the contest, Vijay. Write On! my friend, Bill
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:37 AM
Glad you stopped by Bill with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 12:09 PM
You entwine emotions and imagery to form another striking poem, Vijay. Some memories are meant to keep us company throughout our life. ~ Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 12:56 PM
So nice to hear that from you Paul. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 6:04 PM
"Acrid memories caging his heart" Not a good feeling to have at all. Your words hold so many moments and emotions, each one touching my heart so deeply. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 7:36 AM
Quite emotional for sure, my friend. Thank you for reading this long poem. Much appreciate your thoughts, Brandy. Many thanks.
George Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 12:56 AM
How you have exposed the festering wounds within a young heart who has managed to move away from the place of hard work and meager living to the heart of a city where memories of robbed childhood, discrimination and prejudices follow him like a faithful mongrel ! "Parching his life’s springs, stunting his seasons, Caging his heart where his father’s ashes burn". These culminating lines are indeed soul stirring. Vijay, all the best in the contest !
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Always a treat to read your insightful thoughts, Valsa. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Poet Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 5:03 PM
It's always a pleasure to see your work, Vijay, and this one is no exception. Compassionate lyrics encapsulate your deepest feelings! Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
One Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 1:52 PM
You have such a wonderful way with words Vijay.. this one is full of great verses and as always full of imagery..
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Thank you SO. Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 12:01 PM
Strong emotions, expressed in tender verses, my friend, Vijay! Congratulations. Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 11:27 AM
A powerful verse filled with raw emotions. Sterling poetry Vijay. Tom
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 5:30 AM
So glad to hear that, Tom. Much appreciate your comments as always. Many thanks.
Sands Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 11:05 AM
This is excellent Great writing and powerful lead up to a masterful ending Vijay. Perfect for the contest title chosen too :)
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 5:29 AM
Glad you liked the poem Heidi. It feels real, because it is. Much appreciate your supportive comments my friend. Many thanks.
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