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Evolution

We all packed up and went to the zoo Saw lions, tigers and even a gnu And the funniest face In the whole darned place Was a monkey that looked just like you For the Zoo contest

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Amy Green

Date: 5/17/2010 6:21:00 PM

Like this one a lot.

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/9/2010 10:08:00 PM

Good job! Congrats on your win! Dan C

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/9/2010 6:26:00 PM

Congrats on the win

James Fraser

Date: 5/9/2010 8:05:00 AM

hahaha, this had me laughing Big Style Barbara. Many congratulations on your win in the contest >> James

Date: 5/8/2010 6:12:00 PM

Thanks for allowing me to chuckle with this one. What a day brightener. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoy your success. Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2010 5:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Barbara! -Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2010 5:30:00 PM

I liked this one the first time becuase it reminded me of the other version of the Happy birthday song. Congratulations for your win. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2010 1:44:00 PM

Congrats BG on your success in my zoo contest with this funny entry .. thankxx for supporting my contests.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/7/2010 7:31:00 PM

I enjoyed the humor in your poem.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/7/2010 4:07:00 AM

hey eek! eek! who you calling a monkey? LOL Where's my banana?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2010 11:05:00 PM

hahaha, calling on that old joke but it's still timely as ever. Very nice, and thanks for your welcome comment tonight, Barbara! Luv, andrea