Daffodil Rag

Daffodil Rag

Free, at last free
 from the desk and that phone –
 free to run down the stairs and outside!

All day I watched
 spring stretch in the sunshine
 from the business as usual office upstairs.

How easy, how simple,
 to look at life walking,
 coughing, running, holding it’s hat.

How peacefully sheltered
 the plate glass tombs keep us
 from sunshine, the wind – the rumpus of spring.

But, five o’clock comes
 setting me free again
 to run greet the wind, waiting for me.

Opening the door,
 the wind grabs my hand
 then laughingly pulls me down crowded streets.

We dance with the daffodils
 nodding their approval –
 smiling at the mischief of spring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Trifiatis Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 1:36 PM
More or less we all feel the same way now that we have to stay in because of COVID-19. Your poem surely represents one's desire to escape and live again free among nature. Beautiful uplifting verses. Well written my friend, Sam. Stay safe.
Somadas Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Beautifully penned..longing for freedom is in your words..Those subtle expressions of wind and spring are so graceful to watch.. Great write Sam..
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:52 PM
Thank you Jenish! I always appreciate your thoughtful messages. The freedom of the wind in spring is such a wonderful experience after the blizzards of winter. Have a great spring my friend!
Warrior Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 10:00 PM
Great write my friend...your verses are becoming more potent...best wishes from the Wingster :o)
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Hi WW, thank you so much for your message of encouragement! So appreciated! This is based on a true experience - fun in the sun and the spring!
Faulkner Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 9:26 PM
I love the line 'the wind grabs my hand' - I can feel the exuberant escape!
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Me too! Exuberant is the perfect word to describe the tone of this poem - hadn't thought about it in that way! Thank you for the aha moment grabbing my hand. Happy Spring! Blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 6:12 PM
Hello Sam Kauffman, this poem is so much fun.It made me feel like dancing.Have a nice evening my fiend. Be safe.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Hello Sam Kauffman, i love to dance. I listen to my CD's and dance to the music often. It is wonderful to hear from you as well. Spring blessings to you as well.
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Spring does invites us to dance! I hope you do dance with the wind celebrating Spring. Always wonderful to hear from you! Thank you! Spring blessings!
Hamilton Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 2:09 PM
This is a fun write, thanks for posting Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Hi John, spring is so capricious and begs us to come outside and play - especially now! Thank you so much for your message.
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 12:21 PM
I love the fun and dance you've given this verse. Away from work and just run free. Hugs Eve
Kauffman Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 2:35 PM
That is exactly the way it felt - to have a fling with the wind and spring! Thank you Eve for dancing with me! Stay well and be blessed!
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