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Matthew 11:28-30

Come To Me

Stretched out on wing of weariness, The total collapse of the flesh. Arms and legs, limp and pitiless. The world’s escarpments hurt..enmesh. Come to me, says the one buried… Who rose from the grave. Likewise grim, With heaviness, her soul carried To the foot of the cross…to Him. The death bed’s a feather, so white. Her guardian angel plucked from her largesse…quintessence takes flight. To heavy hearted, He says Come. Decomposing in shallow grave, But not so the soul…it is brave.
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George Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 6:09 PM
Your faith shines through every line Kim. 'Come to me, put all your burdens at my feet"..... What a comforting invitation..... The thought that with death, our life doesnot end makes even the death bed a cozy place. Though the body rots after death, the soul lives on. Lovely poem. To my FAVE.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa! <3
Mcintosh Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 1:38 AM
Beautiful! A inspiration. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 9:19 AM
God bless you too, sweet Gina! <3
Daniel Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 9:16 PM
This is a brilliant poem, Kim, great combination of words:) when we accept Jesus Christ's invitation, we truly get rest amid all earthly troubles...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Yes, we do! Hope instead of despondency. God bless you, dear friend!
Lindley Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 3:22 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry my good friend. A gem and a fav for me. God bless..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 11:33 AM
- A lovely poem, Kim ... a soul so brave :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs ~ Kim
DiMino Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 5:03 AM
For sure, Christ awaits open arms, doorway ajar, we need only enter -- which requires some personal motivation. Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Agustin Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thanks for sharing this faith-edifying muse of yours... I say "Amen" to your concluding couplet. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you, dear Sister in Christ.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Thank you, Beata! :)
Canerdy Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 7:09 PM
Deeply spiritual and moving, Kim. Yes, we can go to Him! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Baker Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 5:25 PM
Very engaging poetry, Kim. He's always there ready to help and even beckoning, "come to me". Thanks for sharing from your heart, Kim. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:19 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Situation Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Trying to remember without looking. Early in Math. Tabatha? IDK I just gather you have faith for writing this.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:19 PM
It’s Matthew 11:28-30
Romios Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Stunning write., Kim. I like it as is..your words painted the picture for me. That is what a true poet does. I vote this as a POTD, it is more than deserving of such an honor, Concepts, vocabulary are beyond awesome. Add your humilty, too.))) Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so very much, Pangie!
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 1:07 PM
I notice what you told Victor below. It would be neat to see the picture that inspired this gem.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:22 PM
Thank you! https://www.ebay.com/itm/392440740934
Buhagiar Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 10:42 PM
You seem so preoccupied with death. I hope you are well. Hugs.xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 4:26 AM
This one was inspired by a piece of art we own. All is well. Thank you, my friend!
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