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Written for the contest " mocking the dead" by Silent One

I am like faded leaves, beneath my frail feet, failing your forbidden name that crushed the petals of blossoming hopes, dusted with dark obsidian nightmares, enclosed in seeds of discontent, sprinkled by sleeping black dragonflies, resting on fruitless twigs, in vales of solitude. Perhaps nature too feels the pain I’ve been carrying when invisible thorns pierce my fragile heart, to leave me bleeding epitaphs, of dead dreams like an endless waterfall, streaming venomous words, swallowed as bitter truth, learned through brutality. Here I am, writing a letter from the grave; in a casket of chaos; like the flower I once used to be, lost and withered, beneath clouds of misery. But skies are no longer my comfort, and the moon has forgotten the healing anthem. Hell is empty and all the devils are here, strangling me- mocking the dead, with fiery chains of anger, that shackle me, as I lay my hair down, on all the blood soaked daggers that stabbed me. So let me sway, to the sanctimonious rhythm of reaper’s rhapsody, for pain is my testimony, that I shall heed, whilst fallen angels chant across the ceremony of betrayal, allowing my fears to rest in peace, no longer having to look back for a final bullet from the familiar faces that deceived me in my walk of faith, as luminescent spheres are full of astroblemes, showing me how destiny is not on my side. And everything I love is burned into timeless sands of scars that still sting.

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Date: 10/1/2023 3:30:00 PM
Great piece. Thank you
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Date: 9/29/2023 1:08:00 PM
How did I miss this gem? Congrats!
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Date: 9/29/2023 11:39:00 AM
Sometimes the way you describe things leaves me in awe.. You have a great way with words and metaphors.. excellent poem.. Thank you for writing for my poem and congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:07:00 PM
So sweet u are silent one, thank u for saying that made me smile a little
Date: 9/27/2023 7:38:00 PM
Descriptive and suspenseful. I enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 9/26/2023 1:58:00 PM
I cannot begin to say how honest and haunting this is. Unbeliebable...
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:07:00 PM
Awwn u are truly a gem
Date: 9/25/2023 2:14:00 PM
This is so incredibly captivating and awesome. Super wowed by your gift dear.
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Date: 9/29/2023 12:07:00 PM
Thank u so much kind soul appreciate u
Date: 9/24/2023 9:29:00 AM
"So let me sway to the sanctimonious rhythm of the reapers Rhapsody" You're use of imagery in all of your poems is awe-inspiring. Becoming one with nature in all of your pain and breaking away to face the torment of the devils. It's beautiful. I really enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your visit and feedback truly grateful
Date: 9/24/2023 5:19:00 AM
black dragonflies, resting on fruitless twigs, in vales of solitude...All at once beautiful, dark and sad.
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:29:00 AM
Thank you kind soul for reading and for leaving your feedback. Grateful really
Date: 9/23/2023 9:56:00 PM
Dark and captivating! A stunning, beautifully composed work! :)
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:35:00 AM
Thank you so very much truly
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much truly
Date: 9/23/2023 7:27:00 PM
Wow! Ink you are an inspiration to poets everywhere, this is a magnificent write, sombre yet elegantly so, I enjoyed every word in every line… Belle
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:36:00 AM
Awwn this is such a kind thing for you to say dear beautiful belle. Truly grateful for your warm support always
Date: 9/23/2023 6:24:00 PM
HOLY GOODNESS!!! My word, Inky, you are magnificent! Okay, my fave because this is just too amazing. Masterpiece.
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:40:00 AM
Awwn this is too kind of you to say . I just bleed emotions. Nothing great but u are so sweet I appreciate u so much for not just supporting me but for buying my book too so grateful
Date: 9/23/2023 12:38:00 PM
What a gut-wrenching write, "Ink." I felt the pain of betrayal and the ensuing chaos that the character had to face. Your imagery was captivating and worked smoothly with the your poem's message. Just an awesome and powerful write! Good luck with the contest. blessings, Sara
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:41:00 AM
Ive seen and tasted betrayal so much it doesnt surprise me anymore, kindness does: thank you kind soul for your generosity and warmth always
Date: 9/23/2023 7:17:00 AM
WoW! Empress, First of I must say your title alone caught my attention. However, as I began to read I was not disappointed. This is so well written. I found it to have deep and dark content and imagery. You gave a voice to the" character" within your write. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend-Alexis
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:43:00 AM
Awwn this is such a sincere and beautiful comment truly i am grateful for your support thank u so much for your beautiful visit
Date: 9/23/2023 7:09:00 AM
Dear friend Ink. This new poem is truly captivating. The vivid imagery you have employed, and the theme of death and mockery, have resulted in a multitude of poignant scenes filled with sorrow. The description of the place is incredibly evocative of the feeling of chaos you have portrayed. Your writing conveys the heart-wrenching agony caused by the betrayals inflicted by those we hold dear and familiar faces. Albeit dark, it accurately reflects the unfortunate reality that life can present.
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:52:00 AM
Thank you always my friend
Date: 9/23/2023 6:10:00 AM
Amazing . Love it
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:09:00 AM
for pain is my testimony, that I shall heed, whilst fallen angels chant across the ceremony of betrayal, allowing my fears to rest in peace--Wonderfully evocative of the place you describe. I felt the vibes of epitaphs throughout reflecting the chaos you describe, Ink. Excellent poetry as always!
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:57:00 AM
Wow, this is powerful. You have taken the contest prompt and shown us so much. Deep, thought proving and well written :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:54:00 AM
Surrounded by 'dark obsidian nightmares', you listen to the 'sanctimonious reaper's raphsody' as a welcome song ! How beautifully and powerfully, you have chosen every word and image. The utterly bleak world you have created doesn't let a ray of light in. I see only the 'fruitless twigs"and "bleeding epitaphs"! What shall I call you other than Empress of poetry !
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:25:00 AM
Mmmm mmmm mmm faded leaves, crushed petals , black dragonflies, fruitless twigs… giving me elements of dark autumn… love, love love it papi.. here I am writing a letter from the grave … mmmmmmm that hit the spot!!!! Oh my goodness that ending is EVERYTHIIIIN! Everything I love is is burned into timeless sands of scars that still sing stars. Masterpiece!!
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:22:00 AM
Oh goodness inky, and you tamped down the word descriptors a bit so the message is clear. I kept waiting for an upturn but none was to be had. This poem is bleak, in a beautiful way. The pain and angst are palpable, real. My fave stanza is #3. "Hell is empty and all the devils are here". Seems appropriate somehow. The solace I get is in knowing this must be fiction. I want to believe your life is happy
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:06:00 AM
Kingy! Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such a heartfelt comment. The prompt was dark so had to go to a dark realm to write. My life is good, i cant complain and i must always thank God for everything. Everyone goes through ups and downs, but right now i am grateful. Iv seen so much of life, and i can agree that life is… so lets always stay kind.thank u for being kind and stay strong always
Date: 9/23/2023 5:18:00 AM
My goodness, dear Ink! This write pulled my gloomy heartstrings and made me feel the depth of these vulnerable emotions..Sigh, what a heart-wrenching write that describes the pain from the shades of betrayals given by the loved ones and familiar faces.There are so many lines that pierced right through and expressed the words of my soul with "as I lay my hair down, on all the blood soaked daggers that stabbed me" So poignant"to leave me bleeding epitaphs, of dead dreams like an endless waterfall
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:03:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much my angelic star you are one of my most loyal supporters! Blessed to have you and to receive such feedback always. Thank you so much
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:20:00 AM
This is an absolutely phenomenal take for the contest, so full of melancholic descriptions yet flowing so creatively with effortless alliterations and phraseology.. I really love how you ended it with "And everything I love is burned into timeless sands of scars that still sing stars" This speaks so much, even when love has turned into ashes, out scars still sing stars..You're a very beautiful soul and I wish you so much love always! Keep writing and shining, best of luck :)

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