But She Loved Another


It was a massive imposing dark castle,
A stronghold safe from invasions;
Fortified with a deep moat and stone rampart,
     On the  battements guards watched.
     And in the dappled light of the chapel,
     A lone girl with long raven hair wept;
     She had been betrothed since her birth,
                                    But she loved another.
        Her family had come here for refuge,
              And she had spent her life within;
She could hear her mother calling from the keep,
Running through the courtyard her hair was flying;
And in her hurry she ran right into his strong arms,
     And suddenly he was kissing her.

And I kissed her deeply because I had to,
I had to understand the taste of her breath;
All her beautiful words haunt me to this day,
     God's Angel of Mercy singing for me.
     Unlike Odysseus' sirens with evil intent,
     Her words healed my troubled heart;
     Her eyes mended this broken man,
                                 Oh her gracious touch.
        Her relentless desire, it conquered me,
           Never before had she acted this way;
It is as if she had suddenly become possessed,
These castle walls were her complete reality.
And I knew her blood belonged in this fortress,
     Now only her name echoes in my soul.


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August 5,  2015

Poetry/Narrative/But She Loved Another
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Written under Pseudonym with Eric Brodie 


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A. Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Wonderful collab Broken and Eric! Congrats on superb win!
United Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Many congrats Broken wings and Eric:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 11:32 AM
What a wonderful collaboration Eric and Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 10:11 AM
congrats a great pen Connie and Eric hugs
A  Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:46 AM
wow... Broken,, Congratulations on your - Partner up - contest win. **SKAT**
Y. Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 11:21 PM
BW, this is a beautiful callab. You Eric did an amazing job! Congratulations on your well deserved win:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Wonderful poem, B.W. & Eric. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Boddie Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:48 PM
it sounds perfect....glad I could be a part of this...;)
La France Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:52 PM
And thank you Eric, it has been an honor writing with you, we created a beautiful poem together and I am very proud of it
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Reads like a winner..Very alluring write..It captured my attention and held it..Thanks..SK
Martin Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Very interesting and so charming!
Scott Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Beautiful pen BW. Good luck to you and EB in the contest!!! All the best.
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:20 AM
ohh, looking forward to the ending of this enthralling piece, constance!.. enjoyed much; huggs
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