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Karen Jones' Power in the Tongue Contest ~ 11/23/2024

Chaucer wrote, "... thy tongue shouldst thou restrain." There is truth in his words for a vile one can cause pain. A sword unsheathed from its scabbard can pierce a heart. In like manner, a wicked tongue can tear a friendship apart. No matter how the teeth bite the tongue before it speaks, if allowed to talk freely, emotional havoc it often wreaks. Each word can be a bullet shot from a combative tongue, delivering a verbal assault when ugly words from it is flung. Be mindful of the sharp weapon your tongue can wield because it's capable of wounding those without a shield. Foul words can't be returned once they've been spewed. Control its abusive actions by having a change of attitude. Don't allow it to run wild then say, "It was my tongue's fault." Control the cruel beast, to say least, and rein it in to a halt. Scripture says the tongue has the power of life and death, so do not allow it to define you. Stop and take a deep breath. Words burn whether whispered, hissed or shouted in scorn, weighing heavily in the air, leaving the innocent feeling torn. A tongue can crush both spirit and soul and tell a twisted tale. Keep it leashed inside your mouth and pleasantries will prevail.

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Date: 12/19/2024 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations!very well penned and I enjoyed reading it.Have a great day!
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Date: 12/16/2024 6:02:00 AM
Such wise words, Lin! Awesome read! Loved the rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on topping the list.:)
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Date: 11/26/2024 11:50:00 AM
Such wise words, Lin, if we would but heed them! A beautifully worded poem. Congrats on your win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/26/2024 1:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ann.
Date: 11/25/2024 6:07:00 PM
"Be mindful of the sharp weapon your tongue can wield because it's capable of wounding those without a shield", "Words burn whether whispered, hissed or shouted in scorn" - Very powerful writing. Congratulations!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/26/2024 5:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Chris.
Date: 11/25/2024 5:25:00 PM
Lin your entry was wise and full of wonderful imagery and the rhyme was a bonus! I loved that you referred to scripture too! Congratulations on your top first place win! Thanks for entering my contest!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/26/2024 5:19:00 AM
Hi, Karen and thank you for finding my poem enough to your liking that it made your winning list. I enjoyed writing for your contest theme.
Date: 11/24/2024 9:05:00 AM
Don't we know it Lin.' I think I reflect thoughts of Most people in stating such? You have touched On one of my memorable porverbs here.' Kudos, And blessings from my tounge today.)
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/24/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment, Joe. I can tell it's sincere ;-)
Date: 11/23/2024 10:00:00 AM
we have the right to be right and the right to be wrong and the right to keep our mouths shut in both instances....
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2024 10:14:00 AM
Yes, we do, John. It's a matter of do we want to rein in our tongue or let it be a horse's ass?
Date: 11/23/2024 9:10:00 AM
A verse of wisdom Lin, once unleashed it's out there and can't be recalled, I agree, it should be kept on a short leash at all times. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/23/2024 2:22:00 PM
Snow gone now but plenty of rain.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2024 9:15:00 AM
Afternoon to you, Tom. The tongue injures with the bark of a dog and the bite of a snake... both need to be restrained. Thanks very much. I wish you were getting my beautiful weather... 60s on sunny days and 50s at night.

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