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Being a Mobile Washing Machine Van

We run a mobile washing machine van,
To help all the people with none.
We wash really fast, have it clean, dried and ironed,
Ready to wear when we’re done.

We visit the aged, we visit the flats, 
We visit the homeless and down.
We leave everyone looking beautiful again,
Beautiful all over the town.

It isn’t so hard, doesn’t cost very much,
When we park the crowds start to swell.
Giving all of their jeans, their shirts, shorts and socks,
Giving all of their foul apparel.

But what’s really interesting is the lack of forethought,
The crowds become a little bit rude.
They hand over their clothes to wash there and then,
Then they all stand around in the nude.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Lewis congratulations on your win with this fun write ~
A   Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Lewis, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Heemstra Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 3:44 AM
Enjoyable read! Great write Lewis!
Smith Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Flies even for a Kiwi. Perfect mate. You even used the Queen's English. Thought she was no longer popular your side of the ditch. Have a good one. David in NZ
Raynes Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Lol, ya dag. Thanks David.
Shanmugam Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 5:22 AM
good one ya;)
Raynes Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Yeah Naa fair dinkum
Misra Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Hey, Lewis, I volunteer to help out for free. Where do I sign up? LOL
Raynes Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 1:41 AM
Yep, ur in the book for next week, a quick reminder next week is the work in the nude week too. :)
Wigley Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:36 AM
They hand over clothing and stand in the nude, it must come at a terrible cost, to the wobblies and danglies all hanging exposed in the sub zero temperature frost. Fun write, Lewis, enjoyed. Regards, Viv
Raynes Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Can tell when it's cold...lol
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