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Autumn's Season

Autumn brushes her hair slowly Letting the glorious colors flow gently to the earth below. Showing off vibrant colors in contrast to summer's green dress. Out doing the starkness, of winter's white coat. Autumn compares the mutable shades of spring to her fall Giving a sigh ,end of another season. She packs her brush as frost touches her tips.

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Date: 7/14/2021 6:55:00 PM
I loved this poem I'm from Vermont and this made me think of my old favorite state. Glad I came across it, very pretty and fun to read.
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Date: 12/25/2019 11:55:00 AM
Nicely done, Phyllis. I always enjoy writing with imagery that paints the picture.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/31/2019 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. Best wishes for 2020. love phyl
Date: 4/24/2019 11:14:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Well penned
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/8/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thank your for your comment on my autumn poem. phyl
Date: 2/23/2019 5:55:00 PM
Hello Phyllis, autumn is a beautiful season. All those colorful leaves are pretty. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/4/2019 5:07:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my poem. It was written some time ago. Sorry so late in my commenting. love phyl.
Date: 1/19/2019 5:42:00 AM
Phyllis, this poem is phenomenal. Love the imagery!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2019 11:52:00 AM
thanks for your comment Valerie. love phyl
Date: 11/20/2018 2:40:00 PM
Phyllis, This was very well done.:) I love the image of Autumn brushing her hair. David
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Date: 3/30/2017 6:54:00 AM
This has moved into my favorites list! I adore the rich description in this poem! 7+++!
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful absolutely beautiful
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Date: 12/23/2016 2:04:00 PM
oh, this is so clever - love it
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Date: 9/29/2015 4:56:00 AM
Very inventive x well done x Wendy
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/3/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting. love phyl
Date: 1/16/2015 6:41:00 PM
Hi Phyllis... Nice Phyllis... enjoyed your comparison with a resignation of autumn's end and time to rest. Thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/3/2015 11:34:00 AM
Thanks for reading this poem Lindsay. Autumn is now upon us and those leaves are flying everywhere. Putting things away for the winter as it will soon be upon us. Not looking forward to snow.
Date: 7/10/2014 10:32:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
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Date: 4/27/2014 9:57:00 PM
This is very nice Phyllis , I'm going through your best poems files. I see a few others I want to read. See you on the next one ;) I haven't posted any new ones for past week though I have a few older ones for you :) congrats on the win with this one !
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Date: 4/22/2014 8:25:00 PM
Just came across this poem you wrote some time ago....I must say it was beautifully written Phyllis :) Ana
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Date: 5/16/2013 3:10:00 PM
Congrats on your fabulous poem and deserved win.
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Date: 4/18/2013 4:38:00 PM
Just read your winning poem and congratulations can never come too late for writing as fine as this Hugs, Suz
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Date: 3/22/2013 8:14:00 AM
Brilliant! A well deserved win.
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:35:00 PM
Aww, I loved reading your poem, loved the way you ended the poem, congrats on your win, peace debra
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Date: 11/29/2012 3:24:00 PM
excellent personification - autumn as a woman changing wardrobe..but, so clever! loved it!!!
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Date: 11/7/2012 7:52:00 AM
This describes my favourite season perfectly! A very belated congratulations on a well-deserved win :)
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:52:00 PM
Phyllis:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/19/2012 9:47:00 AM
thanks PD it was such a great feeling to win. Shows that my writing has come a long way since I started. Thanks . love phyl
Date: 8/15/2012 6:06:00 PM
What a beautiful, elegant description of the seasons, Phyllis! Congratulations to you! - Tim
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Date: 8/9/2012 5:56:00 PM
Jow thrilling for you Phyllis and what a nice poem. This happened to me in November of 2010. Same placement 4th. I was thrilled as i know you are. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations onyour win in this big congtest.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/5/2012 1:31:00 PM
thank you Joann
Date: 8/4/2012 4:48:00 AM
Phyllis, You deserve this wonderful win with this amazing poem. A big Congratulations!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/5/2012 1:31:00 PM
thank you Connie for your wishes.
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