As The Last Petal Falls
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March 3, 2025
~ Second Place ~
Contest: Just March 2025 Posted
Sponsor: Brian Strand
~ Ninth Place ~
Premiere Contest: As The Last Petal Falls
Sponsor: Sara Jama
I recline with my cherry tree musings…
a fountain of blossoms
cherub cheek complected
rise and curve from the ground
up into a heaven and cloud scene
to spread in splendor a festoon of blooms
like cumulus puffs plucked from above
and placed in tufts to fluff graceful branches
plush with clusters the color of a young lady's blush
captured within her maiden buds
before she even knew how to bloom
born of Nature’s wealth
she is rich with ruffled flourish
steeped with dawn’s diamond dew
heaped with pollen-gold pursed
within petal-pouches 'til unfurled like hooped petticoats
—thriving with a thrill
a celebration of flowering moments
alive in beauty yet only for the lifespan
of but a brief thought conjured by the cosmos
she wears the luxe mantle of a romance regent
a spring queen amongst the green
but a reign not designed to last beyond
the swoon of April's pink moon
..and I the lowly grateful grass beneath her class
am charmed and soothed
by the light coral fall of her confetti rain
when her flowers relinquish control
reach into their shared soul
realizing it’s time to let go
falling f a l l i n g from heights of her feminine fame
a shower of rosy carnival streamers
a dramatic-diva's curtain call
..and I the lowly grateful grass beneath her shade
am humbled by the melancholy
of her fading beauty
but I'm cheered to receive
and wear her eye catching mantle
to bear her vanilla scented love letters to the earth
transforming me
from the peasantry of chlorophyll-tame
transforming me
from the mundane to the ordained
for in this moment as you gaze upon me
—these plain blades of grass
even I a m enchanting
as the gift of the last pink petal falls
Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2025
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