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An Insight From Moss

After making the trip to Bar Harbor in Maine, we set off on excursions within that domain. In the midst of events, aggravating, arcane, we began at a loss. We embark on a most unpredictable task - touring Cadillac Mountain with fog as a mask. Fifteen hundred feet high and sh-shaking, we ask with alarm, "Where's the bus?" Safely back at sea level, we all need to chill - "Tell me, who put the rest stop on top of a hill?" Giving vent to our steam, we release it with skill by creating a fuss. So we cuss as we scurry, we snort and stampede up the fifty-two steps to attend to our need. On the zig-zag descent, rather tetchy, still teed, we by chance run across a botanical gem - symbiotic, we learn. A bizarre kind of growth, some avoid with concern. Is it algae? or lichen? a fungus? or fern? a true whatzit for us. I see fanciful lace mid inherent decay; I see whimsical bubbles entangled in play. I see change as our mood now reverses dismay - it's an insight from moss. ************** anapestic tetrameter Every fourth line I change to dimeter to counteract the monotony. Reason A. Poteet http://wiseacre-gardens.com/moss/white-cushion-moss.jpg

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Date: 9/23/2013 5:40:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:43:00 PM
nice Metrical verse win... luv~ Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:51:00 PM
A challenging form well done. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/21/2013 10:40:00 PM
Wow! This is really great composition with great inspiration. I love it and extremely enjoyed reading it this morning my dear friend, Reason. Thank you so much for sharing and my big hearty congratulations on your well deserved super win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:24:00 AM
You caught my attention, so I had to go look up the link for the picture. What interesting subjects you choose for poetry.........I love that you have given us a look at something unique......and then with such a difficult format, you have written an amazing poem. Wow........excellent!!
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Date: 9/21/2013 1:11:00 AM
and it's also cool how your fourth line end rhyme words all finished with ss. nicely done, REason!!
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Date: 9/20/2013 11:55:00 PM
Congrats on winning first place in the contest, Reason
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:28:00 PM
very well written poem...congrats on your big win :)
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Date: 9/17/2013 6:40:00 AM
Certain is an insight for the reader, awesome joy, both well written and so very interesting.....
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