Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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March 9, 2024
A World Without War Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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A World Without War

Peace and unity sing in harmony, echoing worldwide,
When acts of humility replace revenge-infused pride,
When narrowness of mind, naked ambitions subside,
When nations of goodwill, stand together side-by-side.

No inconsolable tears, flooding grief in mothers’ eyes,
No gloomy dawns rise, in smoke of war on sunny skies,
Clamors of hungry, displaced souls, no longer agonize;
No more shattered dreams, buried alive, to eulogize.

Nothingness ceases to vacate sanctity of self-esteem,
Children now rejoice, reminiscing in Cinderella-dream,
Vying bliss of tranquil, endearments of amity redeem,
Discarding ill will, shrieking from yore of vicious regime.

Hiroshima, Nagasaki—echoes of sad, remorseful past,
Resonate horror and shock, from memories aghast;
A world without war, a wish too far, yet close to heart,
Achievable when covenants of life don’t keep us apart.

Dignity of humanity ranks supreme, as priorities change,
Nations engage in educational and cultural exchange,
Farms and factories hum, ensuring hunger is eliminated
As peace and unity toll, from hearts and minds elated.

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Bill Baker March 25, 2024 at 6:48 AM I missed this one while ill, my friend. It is a dandy. I hope it is a winner in the contest! Oh, what a day it would be, for the words of this poem to become our reality. This is a world as it was intended to be. Love, hope, and cooperation as for as the eye can see. Listen world! is my plea. Thanks for sharing these beautiful words of hope through your amazing poetry, Vijay. Have yourself a joyful day. Bill p.s. Yes, another FAV for my list!

Heidi Sands March 12, 2024 at 8:52 AM The first stanza shows important points leading into this poem. Reading on, it inspires hope for peace. Well written Vijay. So true :)

Duke Beaufort March 11, 2024 at 7:35 PM Vijay, I am thrilled that you cited Hiroshima and Nagasaki. Many in USA do not want to accept that bombing those civilian targets was not ethical. Nothing has really changed since then. When we can view others as sub-human, have no empathy, and feel entitled to take what we can by force, the result is what we have now. Your poem is beautiful.

Victor Buhagiar March 11, 2024 at 2:19 AM A poem written in so many contrasts. I once saw a map of the world which is coloured red to show where war is taking place. It was almost covered with red. Great poem though.

Brandy Nicole March 10, 2024 at 7:52 PM Selfishness overpowers generosity. Being in a world where all stand together, that takes sacrifice and humility. Maybe one day we can live in a place filled with peace, understanding and unconditional love. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress March 10, 2024 at 3:28 AM What a profound and meaningful poem this is dear vijay, its always so good to read your poems and this one here flows with so many truths that are soul hitting really: i love the rhymes and cadence of your lines and how well crafted this poem is, your reference to some past wars that were haunting too is impeccable and powerful! I felt so many lines but the cinderella dreams of children and the last stanza stood out for me thas most along with “ A world without war, a wish too far,” FAVE! Luv it Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:24 AM Your generous remarks are much appreciated my friend. Thank you for your presence on my page but also here on Soup. You are among the few who have shown the spirit to celebrate poetic contributions everywhere you visit. Thanks again for being there and thank you for your FAVE.

Tom Cunningham March 9, 2024 at 11:23 PM Wars achieve nothing and just cause destruction and death. If only people would love and respect each other what a wonderful world it would be. Well written Vijay. Good luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:20 AM You are so on mark, Tom. Lets hope for a better world. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet March 9, 2024 at 12:29 PM This poetry entry for the contest is exemplary, as it not only sheds light on important issues but also delves deep into them. The poem beautifully expresses a desire for peace and unity in a world plagued by discord. It advocates for nations to participate in educational and cultural exchanges, to eradicate hunger. The imagery of farms and factories working harmoniously contributes to the overall message of joy and unity stemming from a peaceful mindset. Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:18 AM Can't thank you enough for spreading goodwill on this site with your detailed remarks. Much appreciate, my friend. Many thanks, Lasaad.

Silent One March 9, 2024 at 10:51 AM Great take on the contest Vijay.. Your poem eloquently captures the yearning for peace and unity in a world marred by conflict and division. It begins with a vision of a world where peace and unity resonate worldwide, where acts of humility replace pride and nations of goodwill stand together in solidarity... Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:17 AM Much appreciate my friend. Always glad to see you on my page. Many thanks, SO.

Pashang Salehi March 9, 2024 at 9:19 AM Hi Vijay... You are such a nice person with great hopes... I think humanity lost the battle. Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:16 AM Glad to see you again, Pashang. You may be right--lets keep hope alive. Many thanks.

Nancy Kaufman March 9, 2024 at 8:52 AM Dear Vijay, This is such an outstanding poem. I especially was captivated by "dignity of humanity ranks supreme, as priorities change". Wonderful write. Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:15 AM So glad to hear that from you, Nancy. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Joseph P. DiMino March 9, 2024 at 7:31 AM "naked ambitions subside, When nations of goodwill, stand together side-by-side." Naked of all self centered ambitions -- more universal. "No more shattered dreams, buried alive, to eulogize." From your lips to ears of all hurting nations my friend. "Discarding ill will, shrieking from yore of vicious regime." Let these wise and positive vibrations sing across the internet! Nations engage in educational and cultural exchange, Farms and factories hum, ensuring hunger is eliminated As peace and unity toll, from hearts and minds elated." Wonderful write! Blessings.... Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:15 AM Glad you liked the poem my friend. Much appreciate your detailed insights, Joe. Many thanks.

Karen Jones March 9, 2024 at 6:55 AM This is a fantastic poetry entry for the contest! It raises awareness while providing deep examination of the issues! I think yours is a winner! Good luck! Vijay Pandit March 10, 2024 at 7:14 AM Thank you Karen. Glad to see you on my page--much appreciate.