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A Case For Greatness Mother's Day Dedication

I must apologize to all those who claim
that they have "The Greatest Mom in the World!"
For I know that they are all misinformed
Please jury, don't think me cruel 
but my mom always taught me to tell the truth 
So today under oath I will present my case

I have seen the cups and tee shirts
In some cases even trophies
Each one prominently displaying
this title and highest of honours 
Although I am sure these women
are all quite extraordinary 
today on this most cherished of days
I wish to make my case.

For me the truth of this matter
began fifty six years ago.
For you see my mom became practiced
In the art of mothering sixteen months 
before I was born.
For when my brother was born
She gazed deeply into his blue eyes
In that moment she loved him
with all the power of her being
If you had asked her
she would have told you
it would be impossible 
to love with such intensity again
Then came blue eyed baby number two

Now blue eyed baby number two
yours truly AKA Ricky
was born on the eighth of September 1961
Any other mere mortal would have been exhausted
For you see after a year of changing diapers
and also being married to the biggest blue eyed baby of them all
our not so dear (young dad at the time) 
who would later only make it to not so loved (middle age dad)
My triumphant arrival was greeted by her most amazing smile
For in that moment was born a love that my blue eyes have cherished
through the years 
As most children do I have tested her love in many ways
Still I can say that her love never wained 
In fact this heart has never witnessed any limits to her love
When my sister, blue eyed baby number three was born
I should have somehow felt less loved
However I can assure you
that not once in my many years
have I ever not felt completely loved by her

Hers is the familiar voice that brings me comfort
Hers is the laugh that ads measure to my joy
From her mischievous I have gained my good humour 
From her strength I have absorbed my resilience
Even in her times of pain she has not been lacking in compassion 
Hers I submit is the most generous of spirits
For I have witnessed her dance through her adversity
and never has she been one to wallow in her sorrow
Therefore with confidence and love
I submit to you the jury
that this amazing women AKA Mama Bear
is indeed the "The Greatest Mom in the World


Happy Mother Day 2016
I love you Mom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/12/2016 3:11:00 AM
A wonderful dedication from the heart Richard.. Your mom sounds like an amazing woman! You are truly blessed ;) I enjoyed your write tremendously this morning..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/12/2016 7:44:00 AM
Hi Wilma, she is amazing. She is also on the site and writes under the name Mama Bear.
Date: 5/10/2016 3:49:00 PM
Hi Richard so glad to have seen this wonderful poem, yes you have stated your case, and you are so right, although i'm sure, most poets here on soup, would love to have written this....better still able to put their name beneath it, it is so good!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/10/2016 7:51:00 PM
I'm pleased you enjoyed it Harry, I enjoyed writing it.
Date: 5/10/2016 3:17:00 PM
I'm pleased to be rereading this beautiful poem, Richard! No doubt...you made and won your case! Mama Bear must be a special lovely person and mother. ~ Regards // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/10/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks for giving it another read Paul, much appreciated.
Date: 5/10/2016 8:11:00 AM
What a wonderful writing it is dear, Richard! Who would argue against your claim? A honoring tribute to mothers and to your mother in particular! A seven!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/10/2016 8:28:00 AM
Thanks my friend, this was a fun one to write.
Date: 5/9/2016 11:14:00 PM
Obviously the apple does not fall far from the tree, this is an amazing dedication Richard, superb!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/10/2016 12:03:00 AM
Thanks Arthur.;0)
Date: 5/9/2016 8:02:00 PM
she sounds absolutely wonderful, treasure her to your heart, my mom was so young when she went above but she was the best mom in the world too, could there be two
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2016 9:55:00 PM
It seem so! I will indeed cherish my time with her.
Date: 5/9/2016 3:31:00 PM
hmmm, you still need more proof to make the case with all the rest of us with the best moms. hahaha. Love this. What an awesome tribute for Mother's Day, and how cool, you are a Virgo like me!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2016 9:56:00 PM
Ha ha, great comment!
Date: 5/9/2016 3:07:00 PM
Such a sweet sweet write for such an amazing woman. I love the love you poured out in every line. I don't know who is more blessed....you to have such a mom...or your mom to have such a son. Beautiful...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I'm glad you are getting to know her. You both have a birthday coming!
Date: 5/9/2016 1:46:00 PM
endearing dedication to mama b... so delightful, rich..huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2016 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I also appreciate the hug, hugs back to you.
Date: 5/9/2016 11:01:00 AM
So wonderful! You all are blessed with each other and it is sweet and inspiring. <3 <3
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2016 11:52:00 AM
I do feel blessed, thanks Casarah.
Date: 5/8/2016 5:21:00 PM
Can;t quit now I am on a roll. To each and everyone who has read Richard's words and commented I say a heartfelt thank you for recognizing his talent and his love Thank you all so very much Edith
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2016 8:31:00 PM
You are sweet!
Date: 5/8/2016 5:19:00 PM
Well what can I say to something like this. I am truly blessed with such a son and his siblings who have made me proud in every way hope I did do something to help them become the fantastic people they are. A mother is truly blessed when she receives words like Richard wrote today and I appreciate each and every word. Know that I love you and you make me proud Thank you and I love you Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2016 5:57:00 PM
You are most welcome and appreciated. You are indeed the greatest mom in the world. Love Rick.
Date: 5/8/2016 5:14:00 PM
Such an amazing tribute to dear mama bear !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2016 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine. Hugs Rick.
Date: 5/8/2016 4:18:00 PM
Sure Ricky I will submit, your Mom is the greatest Mom in the world--- she probably learned from mine--LOL. Very sweet write my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2016 6:03:00 PM
I'm glad you also have a special mom. The world could learn much from women like our moms.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2016 6:01:00 PM
I'm glad you also have a special mom. The world could learn much from women like our moms.
Date: 5/8/2016 2:46:00 PM
- Words from the heart - from a great son to a loving mother - Beautifully written, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2016 6:02:00 PM
Thanks and hugs back to you Anne-Lise.
Date: 5/8/2016 9:33:00 AM
Dear Richard, A great tribute to ur mother. Wonderful creation. loved it..........//:) hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/8/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Manmath, I had fun writing it.

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