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Temple of Trajan Pergamon - 1996

1996 Visit To Turkey


In Nineteen ninety-six, our son and wife, Majors
In US Army, moved to Izmir, their new base.
As usual, whatever place they were assigned, 
We flew to visit them as well as dear grandkids.
So off we went to spend two weeks in Turkey, this
Outstanding country we had never been before.

So much to see at Ephesus—Metropolis 
Of Antique Age; The Stadium, the Harbor Bath,
Basilica, the Marble Road, Heracles Gate—
All ruins now. Were sad to see these wondrous works
Of art and architecture now in disarray
And strewn about on fields on which they proudly stood.

Of varied striking sites in Pergamon, we saw
The City Walls, the Aqueducts, Acropolis,
The Temple Dionysus, that of Trajan too.
So many ages, periods had ruled this place,
Artistic wonders, structures turned to ruins—works
Of Persian, Greek, Roman and more, in pieces lay.

Besides the many ancient ruins visited,
We were amazed that many locals spoke our tongue.
They did their best to make us feel so much at ease,
Were gracious in combined Mid-Eastern/Euro style
Of hospitality and types of food they ate
And served, like cheese, tomatoes, olives of all kinds.

Izmir, a city mixed with culture old and new,
Like modern shops and open markets, outdoor stands
With fish and meats on ice, yet weighed on modern scales.
And women with fine bread on plates held up on heads,
Who walked the streets in morning, dressed in peasant garb;
Yet working business women wore more modern dress.

We ventured to the famous city, Istanbul,
Surprised to see the many high-rise buildings there,
And streets so overcrowded with their vehicles;
Large offices and business centers everywhere—
Ladies with fashion boots, purses and western dress;
Big contrast with those living back in country hills.

Such history surrounds this ancient, distant land;
So many varied cultures ruled their sacred world.
Museums filled with artifacts from centuries,
Safeguarded and in view to honor and behold.
This trip shall always hold such special, vivid thoughts
For us to cherish and remember for all time.

Of course, this one-time trip was many years ago;
We're happy we had ventured then instead of now,
For times have changed; such unrest grows within our world.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Memorable Vacations
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Judged: May 8, 2015

Iambic Hexameter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 7:29 PM
Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 9:32 PM
Thank you, Linda. So nice to received your comments. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Sandra, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Thank you, Skat! Your visit is much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Somewhere I have never visited Sandra - a great descriptive write:-) many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Thanks for the nice comment and congrats, Jan. Due to the many places our son was stationed, we did get to visit many places we wouldn't have otherwise! Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:43 PM
congrats Sandra on 1st place most enjoyable poem hugs
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Hi Shadow, still catching up with my comments! Once again, I loved participating in your contest. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate my placement! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Sandra, this was indeed a fantastic vacation, it sounds thrilling and magical, great writing,7, I like this blank verse form, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, in death
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Thank you, Broken. I so much appreciate your nice comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
Das Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Such a lovely write on Turkey. Your poem carried me to that beautiful land. #7
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Hi Nandita, thank you so much for your positive comment and support. I appreciate your visits to my page. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 10:30 AM
- I visit Turkey 3-4 times per year - I have been in Izmir, standing right where you stand in the picture - yes, it is sad that such "treasures" being destroyed ..... however, they are working to repair much of it - the history is still there - a pleasure to read your experience, Sandra - I wish you best of luck in contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Amazing that you visit there so often and were in Izmir. So pleased to know that they are working on restoring some of the sites. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments and good wishes for the contest. Thank you! Hugs, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 10:15 AM
This poem beckons because of people such as yourself who have a soul and feel their world, absorbing all its beauty whilst quietly dispersing this gift to others. If it wasn't for souls like yourself we wouldn’t have the eyes or ears to see and hear the beauty lying just out of reach that makes our world a little less overbearing. Emile. #7
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:19 AM
Emile, I always look forward to your heartwarming remarks that lift my spirit. I thank you so much for your wonderful comments and support, and so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Sandra
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